|Reviews for Vollenden Sie Steuerung|
| bwineylion chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
I wish this was a series! I love evil ryou fanfics, and this was very well written. The first person view was a good choice, it really adds to the depraved mindset. One can become simultaneously more connected to the character as similar needs are related, yet also more detached through the disturbing intentions. I Love it.
| The-Cursed-Daughter chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
As a fan/fellow writer of a bad-ass Ryou, I loved this! (Although all of our YGO stories are on DeviantArt because I'm lazy. -_-)
This story was all different kinds of lovely, because Ryou is so easy to take liberties with, because no one really goes into HIS story, canonically. And you portrayed him perfectly.
I also like that this is one of the few stories where Bakura is Ryou's bitch.
| Hex the Magician chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Amazing. I love you take on Ryou and Bakura's relationship. I like how you also made Ryou power hungry -even more than bakura-. I gotta say that I absolutely love a more crazy and dark Ryou. The idea behind there soul room was unique. I love how you didn't separate their soul rooms but instead made them share one. Ryou and Bakura are more alike than they lead on and I'm glad you saw that.
| looptheloopy chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Holy SGUHJ. I love your stuff!
| sunflower.cc chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
This fic is simply FABULOUS. But you've actually got to wonder why Ryou insists on hanging on to the Millenium Ring if it causes him so much 'harm'... So in a way your story does make sense.
Anyway, GREAT JOB! :D
| LifeInABox66 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
This is so very fascinating! You've subverted pretty much everything that fanon takes for granted: the idea that Ryou is the submissive one; the loving one; the one being manipulated rather than the one who desires power for its own sake.
Here, Bakura loves unconditionally, but Ryou does not even know if he is capable of it. And the idea of the soul room being completely white - and shared? Genius. Because what 'evil' seeks, above all, is destruction, negation. Here, there is both destruction _and_ creation.
Basically, this is extremely clever, with a wholly original twist. As an alternate interpretation, I like it.
| Affy-Bakura chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Seme Ryou? XD I find that surprisingly hot.
I like this, totally different then most peeps have Ryou.
| tiera chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
in german we say "stille wasser sind tief" (still waters run deep) and i think it fits ryou perfectly. you never know what he's thinking and he always has this creepy soft smile which lets you wonder what he's thinking.
and, come on, he's been stuck with bakura for how long? a few years? that must have rubbed off on him. i can see where you're coming from with this fic and i like it :)
however the title and your "And you know, Ryou and Bakura and Yuugiou just have so many German undertones" made me wonder what you mean by that. please please please explain it to me! i don't know what you're refering. do you mean all the backstabbing or secrecy between the characters or what? because i don't see those as typical german traits (considering that i live in germany i do wonder what those german undertones are)
also the title is grammaticaly wrong and doesn't make much sense to me. if you intended that, please ignore the following :) this is not meant as a flame!
"Vollenden sie Steuerung" is a command and you would need a definite article (die) before "Steuerung". however it would always translate as "finish the controls (in the sense of something like a remote control)" but seeing your last sentence "And finally, I would have complete control." (btw please kill yugi! xD) lets me think that you wanted something more among the lines of "complete control" in german. "complete control" in german would be "totale Kontrolle" or "vollkommene Kontrolle" or "absolute Kontrolle".
i don't want to make this review any longer than necessary by adding grammar rules and such, so i'll leave you my email address if you want to go more into detail, alright?
| Allison chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Okay...I reviewed...just like you told me to a whole five minutes ago. Wo.
I was really tempted to leave a blank review with my name on it, but I decided not to be so cruel. XD
So, I shall review...Even though the story isn't much to my taste (our tastes seem to differ a LOT), it was a pretty good one. A few grammar errors there, but nothing to blatant.
The descriptions were well executed, and the structure was very well done in whole.
Okay, I'll stop talking like an English teacher and more like a schoolmate, "Good Job". d _ b
| theNewDesire chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Oh. My. God. This story is so fascinating! I've never read a fanfic even close to the ideas in this one... AND I LOVE IT! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... excuse me. You are a fabulous author and I really enjoyed this piece of writting.
| KhaosKitty chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
My outside appearance was always a polite and soft smile when I greeted Yuugi Moutou. My inside self plotted with lurid excitement.
Using my last name as a misnomer since he had none to call his own, Bakura was always with me.
Interesting, and different!
Not exactly how I see it but I could really get into Ryou's character, totally believable!
God bless Ryou in all his mysterious glory... he's so freaking perfect...
Great fic, I'm impressed!
| flufffmufffin chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
lol. unf. okay well i finally read a possible explanation for a chunk of time in the story. goodjob! i dont think much thought has been given to ryous feeling about things! glad to finally read some. :D
| Parker Stark chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
I love it. It's beautful. HEY LOOK! A Rozen Maiden advert at the bottom of the screen!
I like this alot...is it finished?
| Pork Steak the Grande chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Who knew Ryou could be so morbid? Haha. ;D I love how Ryou is seen as "evil" in this, in that he is secretly the one wanting all the power he can get. Bakura only wants to destroy one person but Ryou wants to destroy the whole world. Ryou is wonderfully disturbing and I just can't help but wish there was more. I love that Bakura can be a pushover but in a believable way. I also love the scene of them finally meeting, with Ryou unable to wait. I think you can feel the tension and longing he held for Bakura, even with such a short length! I am so envious you get so many reviews but no doubt, they are well deserved! You are extremely talented and I wish you the best! 8D
Also, I heard about your health problems and I just wanted to wish you well! I plan to pray for you tonight. :] You are amazing and so is your story! Hehe. Well, I am done being a crepy fan and I am even slightly thinking about reading your other stories though they do not contain my loves Ryou and Bakura getting together and for me, when they do not get together, it is alot to take! Haha, okay I done now. Perfect story and I am sending you much good vibes! 8DD
| Cat O' 9 tails chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Where's the mindfuckery? But yes… Grovel in might of my bad grammar and sarcasm!
I took German for a year and a half in school, but my teacher was really creepy! The rumor is that he was involved with some really kinky porno…He was always asking me if I wanted him to drive me home. (I‘ve got worse on him…)The worst part was, he admitted to speaking Yiddish, and not German. We would always ask him for translations, and he would usually tell us he didn’t know, to look it up in our German dictionaries. I learned more on my own…At home…
The relationship you described here was more like the one I had always pictured from the manga series. (The plain Yu-GI-Oh, not the duelist…or others?) It’s as always, beautiful and well written! Although, the absence of sex and psychological/physical torture is somewhat disturbing…
And thank you for all your replies! They make me a giddy little fangirl! Although I’m fairly certain I’m older than you, I’m still little in my head! Peter Pan syndrome…
So I give you one of the few creepy phrases my teacher actually taught us! Ich liebe dich!