Reviews for Making a Move
Angelus chapter 2 . 6/17
Cute
Writtenaspr chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Like it, like it, and adore it immensely... write more, please.
Sook03 chapter 2 . 1/1/2013
Haha, as delightful as it was, did they cast a contraception charm?
Sook03 chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I'm glad Crookshanks isn't there, otherwise he'd be staring O.o
I M Sterling chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
Awww...I LOVED this one!
ExAmoreDolorem chapter 2 . 7/22/2012
Awww!
Ponine12 chapter 2 . 6/24/2011
I was rereading (this story always makes me smile) and for the first time really noticed the title of Hermione's book...SO CLEVER! I cracked up. Thanks for making even the little details awesome! :)
scrambledangel chapter 2 . 5/4/2011
Just noticed the appalling lack of reviews- I love this story, definitely a favorite! :)
Alexa1993 chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
randomfan17 chapter 2 . 3/27/2011
Cute, i liked it.
azukkar chapter 2 . 8/13/2010
Awww, this is one of the cutest stories I've read! You have a good sense of humor and depicted the thoughts behind the situation well.
GreenEyedBabe chapter 2 . 6/24/2010
very cute. I really liked it. Thank you for sharing.
crunchynoodles chapter 2 . 10/30/2009
aw... not my favorite paring but really nice!
hellerii chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Favorite things in this chapter:

*shopping for bait

*initial shock at kiss

*clumsy enthusiasm

*running up the stairs 2 at a time

:)
magialuna chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
You capture these two so well. Poor Severus who simply cannot imagine she'd be interested and frustrated Hermione who really doesn't have *that* much more experience with relationships. They are SO cute together. I loved the comment when he was cradling her head and she thinks about men being unwilling to sacrifice their hands to "that hair".

This whole little story was absolutely perfect and I really love that you told both sides of the story.

CLare
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