Reviews for Broken Pride
lorriesherbet chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
L's a rapist?! What the *£%k?!
legendofpanties chapter 3 . 8/20/2013
I live in Canada, and there is a shit load of snow here.
legendofpanties chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
Uh oh, looks like Near is turning emo...
legendofpanties chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Omg.. even thought i hated the thought of L raping Near, it was so hot and entertaining to read!
Rei chapter 22 . 8/12/2013
Beautiful. Now ill go read the next one!
Rei chapter 21 . 8/12/2013
Sweet.
Rei chapter 20 . 8/11/2013
"I want to make you better. I want to make you feel divine, and beautiful, and strong." I loved that part! Just idk seems beautiful to say to Near! The ending thou! Ugh hope things get better!
Rei chapter 19 . 8/11/2013
Near clinging to Mello...I love.
Rei chapter 18 . 8/11/2013
For a second I thought L was gonna make Mello hear him rape Near! Thank god!
Rei chapter 16 . 8/10/2013
Glad Mello came to save him! And that last part of them just staring at each other was cute
Rei chapter 15 . 8/10/2013
I think it would have been just a smidge more cute if they had reached under the door to touch their fingers or squeeze them reassuringly! That would have been sweet. I still love how you made them back to back on the door.
Rei chapter 14 . 8/9/2013
So good! I love how Near wanted Mello to comfort him!
Rei chapter 13 . 8/9/2013
Them comforting each other was very good and the last line owned it!
Rei chapter 10 . 8/8/2013
Extremely cute what you did with Mello giving Near his jacket! I also love the fact that it was snowing it brings out idk a good thing of the story.
Rei chapter 9 . 8/8/2013
This is good they're progressing and their relationship is starting to develop although rite now it's a 'friend' helping out but I also liked how Mello said some facts about how rape victims are
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