Reviews for Broken Pride
Guest chapter 21 . 1/27
This is the first slow love-making scene I've actually been able to enjoy without felling uncomfortable or bored! Well done!
Guest chapter 21 . 1/27
I've never been able to enjoy a slow love-making scene before. Well done!
Guest chapter 20 . 1/27
That 'cliffhanger' not 'evil', because you've already made it clear that Mello cares about Near. Not only that, but obviously Mello's rough nature would affect Near, especially in this vulnerable state. It's really not that shocking.

Good story, though.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/27
Near seemed more ooc tho
Daime Guiral chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
Is it just me or this is Near's POV in Kiss Away the Pain?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2016
You're still following haleybopcomet?
AmericanPotato chapter 24 . 8/21/2015
This was so beautiful. Omg.
Person chapter 23 . 6/12/2015
I have read both the original and the re-write, and I can honestly say that this is one of the best fics I have ever read.
lorriesherbet chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
L's a rapist?! What the *£%k?!
legendofpanties chapter 3 . 8/20/2013
I live in Canada, and there is a shit load of snow here.
legendofpanties chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
Uh oh, looks like Near is turning emo...
legendofpanties chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Omg.. even thought i hated the thought of L raping Near, it was so hot and entertaining to read!
Rei chapter 22 . 8/12/2013
Beautiful. Now ill go read the next one!
Rei chapter 21 . 8/12/2013
Rei chapter 20 . 8/11/2013
"I want to make you better. I want to make you feel divine, and beautiful, and strong." I loved that part! Just idk seems beautiful to say to Near! The ending thou! Ugh hope things get better!
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