|Reviews for At The Edge|
| Virtuella chapter 5 . 8/9
Oh, I really like this!
It was a delightful detail about Simon appreciating the pliable soil under his foot. And there were other little points that enjoyed very much, like Mal thinking Jayne would never pick roses, or River’s memory of the games of hide and seek, the ambivalence about keeping or binning the roses. And about speaking quietly in the hospital so as not to attract death’s attention.
Very touching, River’s fear of him losing the use of his hands. She is right, for him in particular, that would be so much worse than using the power to speak (which was somewhat impaired, ahem, at times anyway…).
The ending is so sweet. Kaylee’s idea to let him practice on children’s books, that’s cute, but even sweeter was that in spite of his new difficulty, he can finally tell her he loves her without a stammer.
| evi ive chapter 5 . 3/24
| Nyan Cat chapter 5 . 8/5/2013
Thank God! You didn't kill him! Phew. That would've been... Bad?
| Lady Greenwood chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Love the story, well written well done xxx
| lillypad22 chapter 5 . 9/8/2012
OHMYGOSH. This story has been too cute for words. Angsty, adorable, fluffy, and amazing. I loved it Very inventive, and original. Great work.
| Marie King chapter 5 . 6/27/2011
Wow! Please add more chapters to this! It's a amazing story! You captured everyone wonderfully! I am dying to read what happens next! Please update when you can!
| MidnightRosebud chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
Thank heaven it was only his speech. I really enjoyed your story, and liked the added qoutes about roses at the beginning of each chapter.
| sexy-jess chapter 5 . 11/4/2008
Very interesting, I will keep an eye out for your next update!
| Fififelicity chapter 5 . 9/17/2008
Wow this is a beautiful fic. Will there be more?
| impeccableblahs chapter 5 . 9/9/2008
hate that you don't have a lot of reviews. this story deserves way more than what you're given. it's so beautiful. sums up kaylee/simon perfectly, and you have each character written so well. zoe's worries for kaylee; trudging up how she dealt with wash's death, was amazing. that, and when mal asked river if simon could hear them, are my favorite moments so far. it's the small details like this, that make it so great. i hope you update soon. i love it :P
| krissie678 chapter 5 . 9/8/2008
| bladefax chapter 5 . 9/7/2008
A great story...keep it going.
| Mary Kroll chapter 5 . 9/7/2008
Well done! The scenes were painted quite immersively. I hope I do as well with the opus I'm struggling with now. Let me know if you'd ever like to trade beta duties.
| ladykreanna chapter 5 . 9/7/2008
I happily take credit for getting you into Firefly...that's what you get with me as a roommate.
I loved this fic...very angsty! And I really thought you were going to kill Simon (and am glad you didn't)!