Reviews for Last One to Leave, Turn out the Light
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Yummy, love them smoking
FreekyDisaster18 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Now that's a might threesome! Gorgeous read.
knownaliases chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
sexyhot! fantastic characterization and again beautifully rendered. ive spent the past couple of days reading your fics - i hope you'll contintue to share your work.
Eccentra chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
This was really good. Some of it a little cliché but it's difficult not to be cliché when writing about sexual encounters. I like that you are comfortable enough with the language and characters to not make the reader feel uncomfortable reading about them in an entirely unknown situation. I enjoyed this a lot.
Smudge the rat chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
I liked this, but I think you could do with reconsidering certain terminology for female body parts.

(I know, there is no acceptable terminology for female body parts. But 'quim' and 'pink' don't sound right to me.)
my1alias chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Whoa! Awesome sexy scene! Just the thought of those three..woo! Great job!
kaitebug chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
i dont get the epilogue
Jack Mitchell chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Liked it, wasn't too bad at all.
VenusdeMolly chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Wow. That was both hot and sweet. Truly, the peanut sauce of fanfiction. Your Jayne was just incredible. I usually go more towards the Kaylee/Simon, but you've made an incredibly compelling argument for Kaylee/Jayne. I would love to see more with them together, even if it isn't a continuation of this story.
impeccableblahs chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
ooh! i've read this one on livejournal.

showers and sotweed. lol yeah, how could i forget.

i loved this one.