|Reviews for Internal Wars|
| JillTheCrazy1 chapter 3 . 10/25/2008
I've never got into Batman and the rest when I was a kid, so the cross over is a little weird to me. However, the story is excellent. Great spelling, punctuation and all that.
| bloodyknight85 chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
'No idea, man... No idea if Bruce has a callsign or not... Sorry...
First thing's first... Have never seen GITS... Don't know what happened here... As far as i am concerned, Section 9 is trying to protect the doc who is being chased by Section 3 commanded by some leaders of the nation due to some laughing man incident... Trying to erase the evidence which is the doc, i suppose... Have no idea why the Bat is here... But it is good to see... Quite strange when you imagine him meeting Motoku and the others... The man with the Bat mask...
Then again, if they would meet Code Geass's Man of Miracles, Zero... That would certainly be amazing...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update soon!
| Tharagon chapter 2 . 10/3/2008
Right, i won't be quite as postive with this one. The writing style is a little clumsy at points, the dialogue however is good, but the breaks in the speech such as:
'Motoko manipulated the remote to show the image of a young man in his late 20s with the scene of an accident involving a train near a railway station'.
...are too long . I mean, it could flow a little better, not that i'm been insulting or anything, most who take their time to read this huge chapters would find a good story line here, though there seem to be huge amount of super heroes popping up all the time which is slightly wearing at points.
Still, good effort..
| Tharagon chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
This is a very detailed and engaging Fanfiction. It's very clear, very descriptive and adds a whole new edge. And i don't even read super hero comics!
Still, interesting subject, and you haven't suped up the heros powers or anything either which makes it still believable.
And nice twist at the end with Ghoda