|Reviews for Brick By Brick|
| Yvi-sama chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
I remembered this chapter was good, but it was even better XD I actually missed this sceene so much, I had to read it today (like whenever you just looooove a movie and have to see it 'right now!')
As always, loved it!
| Ramix chapter 23 . 3/28/2013
NO IM NOT CRYING I JUST HAVE SOMETHING IN MY EYE.
I HAVE SOMETHING IN BOTH MY EYES OKAY?!
I HAVE SOMETHING IN MY HEART! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHH!
You're a great writer!
| LunaClefairy chapter 18 . 1/5/2013
OMG. The idea of Zidane getting hiccups is GOLD. And if even Amarant is laughing, it's definitely hilarious.
lolz, his tail fluffs every time he hiccups? Makes me think of my pet bird; his tail drops whenever he chirps.
| eratoqwerty chapter 23 . 12/5/2012
These are awesome. I really liked what you did with Amarant and Quina there. Nice job.
| Elementess chapter 23 . 10/26/2012
This story was nothing short of wonderful. Your portrayal of each of the characters was spot on and Dagger and Zidanes relationship in particular was more then satisfying for my feelings towards my one true pairing. Usually these stories end with them reuniting in Alexandria, but I have to say I liked this far more.
I was so curious as to how Zidane wound up in Dagger's arms that night and now not only have my questions been answered but it made for a perfect ending! The humor in the story made me want to squee like any obsessed fangirl because it was so awesome imagining the characters in such humorous situations that were never featured in the actual game. Thank you so much for this story!
| Cryptic Curiosity chapter 23 . 9/10/2012
dsajajfdkljk This is amazing! It is so well written and very in touch with the characters and just amazing! I loved every single second of reading it! I about bawled when it ended. I flipping love this! Even though it practically ripped out my heart..MY FEELS asfhjsdfhdjsfjasj. Your such a talented writer! 3 3 3
| D.j.m.r. Nileheim chapter 23 . 8/27/2012
I just read all of this in one go, so waited till this final chapter to leave my review.
Damn that was a good read! :D. I have also wondered about all the small gaps that could be filled within the game (the treks, the camping, etc etc). Their were obviously some things it couldn't do because it was a game, but you really built a bridge between game and story and it just reflected so well with the ending of the game. I'm very impressed, and am about to raid all of your fanfics now. Keep it up darlin!
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
The best FFIX fic I have ever read, bar none.
Thanks, seriously, Thanks.
| loyalty-and-devotion chapter 23 . 8/2/2012
I absolutely loved this story. You REALLY got in touch with the characters, and personally I feel like I can relate to them more here than in the game!
You're a fantastic writer! Don't ever stop!
| Felling chapter 16 . 7/13/2012
I cant help it. Ive been pronouncing Zidane as Ze-dain this entire time and now that Ive learned the truth I dont care. xD Its too much for me LOL. But great chapter, I keep dying everytime I try to beat the monster in the cage. -.-
| Link Slate chapter 23 . 6/12/2012
Never stop writing.
I can't help but find myself drawn back to your stories continuously. You write absolutely eloquently. You don't pause where it's unnecessary, you create fantastic tension, your writing style is fluent and remains captivating and enchanting. I'll admit, I'm almost a little charmed by the way I can so easily place myself through the eyes of any of the characters that you describe.
... Also Garnet may be the girl I dream of marrying. _
Buuuut I'll let you decide whether or not you think that influences my love of your works. :D
Keep it up, for now I'm off to re-read this entire fic.
| wechard chapter 23 . 5/12/2012
This story was great! Are you going to write about Zidane and Garnet getting married, or their life afterwards? Also, did you ever get the Ark summon, and how/where did you find the chest to make Choco become red?
| wechard chapter 14 . 5/11/2012
This story is great so far! How do you get Choco to level up from just being able to go on shallow water? I beat the game, but the farthest I could get Choco was the first level up for him.
| Lionpuppeh chapter 23 . 3/26/2012
This is the best chapter. Her talking about the wedding and the roses...it makes my drug addled heart go pitter patter...
Ugh, Ambien is taking effect. I shall go to bed now. But not before faving eeeeverything. :D
| IthinkIthinktoomuch chapter 23 . 3/24/2012
Well, Im reviewing this after marathoning it for several days and finishing all the chapters, and I think the best word to describe this work is:'Brilliant'
I love it. I really do. I think the writing and characterizations are incredible, and your take on the plot with everything just seems to gel with the original game perfectly. I literally got emotional reading this, and being able to do that - make the reader feel all the emotions and empathize or sympathize with the characters - is just wonderful.
If there's one thing I can fault though, and it's a very, very minor thing, there were some minor typos and grammar errors. Sometimes I felt there would be a missing word or comma, but that may just be because of the different English styles. A comma before the word 'but', a 'that' that I thought could have been there but wasn't. Like I said, incredibly minor things that dont detract from the all too many positive aspects of this story.
Having finished this story, there are two things I want to do. One is to read Foundations, which I believe will be a blast, and the other is to play Final Fantasy IX, and think about all the chapters in your story when the gaps show in the game. So last but not least, thank you, for sharing with the world a wonderful story that sticks true to the source material while still being amazing in its own right. I don't think you get nearly the amount of praise in this fandom as you deserve(FFIX is one of the less popular games, sadly) so Im just providing some. Haha. Love your work :)