|Reviews for Elemental Four|
| Robbie chapter 8 . 9/24/2011
I like this story, especially the second half. I've read it four times now and you always have me glued to the screen. I love it when the whole team is involved.
This is at least as important as the plot: Your writing style is intrigueing and one can put oneself in the charcter's posititon. Thanks.
| Cissyaliza chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Very good fic, with many angst and Don whump... just what I prefer.
| EmptySky chapter 8 . 5/8/2009
The title itself made me curios on the story already, especially the first part of the prologue where you gave this little intro with the numbers just as it is on the show. And, not to be sexist or this crazy fan totally in love with Rob Morrow in his underwear, cause I’m not at all, the thought of Don like that in this precarious situation made everything more exciting and dramatic.
Using the four elements and integrate them in a fully thought-out story is brilliant. I’ve really come to like that you split the story into the different dates and times. It’s a good thing Don’s team realized he was supposed to be the fourth victim in time to go and look out for him. Colby’s thinking was brilliant; to give him much needed air like that. It’s not like they had any oxygen tanks there or anything else. The way his team is there for him, breathing for him literally and holding his hand to calm him gave me a nice picture of the way the team works together. The very second Don got to sit up and take in some air himself, I was so relieved ) I thought that this was a well-written and well thought-through story which made it nice to read. Even the explanation for the woman’s reasons and motives to act the way she did were ‘logical’ in the sense of a proper Numbe3rs-show explanation. Good job!
Last question though, how did you decide on answering the sequel-question?
| donfan01 chapter 8 . 4/22/2009
I just read this story and i really like it. are you still thinking about doing a sequel for it? i think the ideas you had for the sequel are great and would definitely like to read it. plz write a sequel. :)
| epalladino chapter 8 . 1/31/2009
Fascinating story and very suspenseful. You also did a great job in the sections that were from Don's POV as he was submerged in the water. Thanks for the interesting read, Beth
| coconut-dreamer chapter 8 . 9/24/2008
I just finished reading the entire story and I enjoyed it very much. I loved how everything tied in together - even "Larry's" ather element.
| daine chapter 8 . 9/19/2008
that was a very good fic.
| Jan-AQ chapter 8 . 9/18/2008
I liked the four elements tied into the story. I'd like a sequel, but something hurt/comfort! Thank you for sharing this story!
| Jan-AQ chapter 7 . 9/18/2008
Awesome chapter! Fantastic story! Wow. I'm so glad that Don was rescued!
| newgal chapter 8 . 9/17/2008
Great job! Love it.
| Patty chapter 8 . 9/16/2008
Valerie: Thank you a million for this suspenseful and well-written story. I enjoyed it
from start to finish athough as I said earlier, knowing in the first chapter that Don was
in such danger made the whole story hard on my nerves.
On the strength of this story, I checked out your other stories and found that I'd read
some of them and had been terribly impressed with your ability. I still think of Dark Justice
occasionally and just shake my head. Don't like to think of such a possibility.
Please give us the sorta promised sequel. There's lots of ideas already in your head and
I promise it'll be welcomed by all your fans.
| tearbos chapter 8 . 9/16/2008
Naked? Don was nearly naked in this fic! Why, I hardly even noticed! ;) *ahem*
I could definitely hear Don in this chapter. It felt like I was watching an epi.
You already know I'm looking forward to a sequel. Some vivid flashbacks, a panic attack or two, and some teasing are certainly in order.
| simanis chapter 8 . 9/16/2008
You see! I know about that um mouth to mouth will not go off without any teasing... ha ha..waiting for the sequel.
Ah.. too short..was hoping maybe poor Don will have some anxious moments of infection, delirium etc. you know more Don whump, he he.
Nevermind, waiting for your sequel. thanks!
| Sharon chapter 8 . 9/16/2008
Great story! I loved the tight writing that moved the storyline along and the alternating points of view throughout. The characterizations are very believable as well.
Sure hope to see a sequel to this sometime in the future!
| Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 8 . 9/16/2008
Very nice wrap up. I liked Megan's explanation about the killer and her twisted father. And I thought the Greek, astrology and modern zodiac worked very well. There are so many stories out there, it is hard to come up with something unique. There are only so many ways the Eppes boys can get into trouble and when something different like that comes along it is very refreshing. The four elements was an interesting touch, as well.
Now, to reiterate, unique is good - a different type of danger to the Eppes is better - and if they happen to be in their boxers - well, that would be great.
And best of all would be a sequal.