Reviews for Irony In Imperfection
gamtavanderisolotp chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
Lawl kisamexitachi one of mah otps QwQ
StubblePrince chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
oooh my

i haven't read smut with them written so well in such a long time

thank you for writing this and making me happy!
Akatsukifangirl chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
It's not bad. And it's... unique. Nice job!
dont-steal-Hidans-tofu chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
NYA! I COMPLETELY AGREE! Itachi's imperfections make him perfect. . . and you have AMAZING writing abilities. just the right amount of sweet and love, not to little and not overload, just perfect!
assassi chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Ah, you shameless little perv! :D You've done great, I've never thought a good and juicy lemon could be written in less than 1000 words! Keep up! :)
Neko Hoshi Hime Okami chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
omg that was yummy. *hides nosebleed*
AliceCambio chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
That was very nice.
Angel Lupin chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Omj amazingly done. Very descriptive. I love this.
sweet-and-simple chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
I thought it was sweet, somehow. Like a fluff, except there was none and a lot more smex. Very, very nice. X3
Sunaona Shiratori chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
I absolitelly loved it
x.WaitingForTheVan.x chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
**dizzy** ...awesome...O-O
DeviWan chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
YOSH! I love this pairing! And since you begged so badly, even on your knees, I shall review... whichI am doing right now...

Anyways, thanks for writing this. I love the pairing to death... but can't seem to write about them... So I really appreciate this. The plot if so CUTE! Aw. Kisame adores Itachi so much... cute...

well done.
roflmort chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Why would you lick my knee. Why would you do that. Now I have to go to the store and buy like super disinfectants because I'm deathly afraid of germs!



Anyway. It was a nice drabble, and yes I must agree a bottomingfromthetop!Itachi is very nice. :D
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
I was re-reading this (I do, periodically, stock up on good porn from my favourite authors) and I realized I'd never reviewed. Shame on me!

It probably doesn't need saying, but I have to tell you that you're amazing. You manage to fit so much emotion and such intricate dynamics into just a few words, it leaves me all starry-eyed (though that might be due in part to the smut I suppose) Kisame is right and so are you. Itachi is tiny and yummy and is so a dominant-uke type. And he's perfect, of course.

Sorry for not reviewing before! (And please write something more as soon as you can, I live for the days with good slash in _)
MonochromousRainbow chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Wow, that was HOT! And bottomingfromthetop!Itachi is the best type.

I'd've liked it if you included a bit more as to what these flaws are, because it sounds kinda weird to just say, "He has flaws and I like them and am not going to explain." IMO, of course.

Your writing style is great. VERY smooth. Your transitions are good, and I don't see any choppy writing, nor do I see any random notes that would distract me.
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