|Reviews for Undying|
| Chilltown chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
I like it so far, but depending on what you had in mind, it could've been over with in one chapter. I'll keep an eye out for this.
A spatter of misspelled words here and there, but I don't mind.
| HockeyFreak chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Wonderful! I love how you turned Peach into someone who actually has some brains. *lol*
This is very well written. Your imagination must be very good for you to come up with something complex like this. I feel like I'm watching some lost episode of the Twilight Zone!
Please continue writing!
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
*applauds story anyhow*
| Sarifina Filth chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Anouther masterpeice. I enjoyed this one for some reason. When do you think you will make the next chapter, try to hurry, thanx )
| Mony123 chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Heh I love long chapters but if that means you update lessoften then no :3