Reviews for My Heart Burns for You
Lientje16 chapter 78 . 6/6/2020
This is by far the best story I have ever read. Thnx for writing such a beautiful story 3
RamonaFlowers25 chapter 21 . 6/1/2020
RamonaFlowers25 chapter 19 . 6/1/2020
*literally sobbing* I am in love with this story
Naru-Vampire chapter 18 . 5/31/2020
I caaaannntttt handle all this waiting! Stop interrupting them people!
QuietShadowz chapter 3 . 5/29/2020
It's been years since I read this fic and with Avatar being on Netflix again and me rewatching it I couldn't help but think about this fic so I had to come re-read it!
Black Doves chapter 33 . 5/29/2020
I'm really enjoying reading this fanfic, I think you've done a good job. The only main criticism I have is this: pay attention when you say time has past and make a timeline for when things occur. It seems like time isn't consistent.
examples: Zuko left Mai's room before they left to find Ursa, weeks (a minimum of two weeks since it is plural but could be more) past on the ship, then even more time passed as they traveled to find Ursa and back to Ba Sing Se. When Mai speaks to Zuko she mentions the fight as being 'the other day' it was at least 3 weeks if not a month prior.
Another one is here where Aang states they got the false letter almost a month ago and now are only a few days away from the Fire Nation. It took weeks to get to the colonies and weeks to get back, thet doesnt even account for the time Zuko snd Katara were captured, traveling alone, or the weeks that they have spent back in the Fire Nation. The missive would have come longer than a month ago. It can become confusing when time isnt lining up right. I love what I've read so far, I can't wait to finish, and I hope you write more in the future.
Guest chapter 20 . 5/26/2020
I don’t like angst... not at 3:22 in the morning.
SakuraTigress chapter 78 . 5/21/2020

I can't believe it's over! TT-TT

The drama is awesome and the romance between Katara and Zuko is incredible! Not to mention the way you write and how you portray the characters! I'm going to go back and reread this entire story all over again!

Thank you for writing this masterpiece!
Ines Kanoyan 53 chapter 35 . 5/15/2020
I love love love the betrothal gifts! swooning over Zuko's perfectionstrong, powerful, sexy, sweet. Oh myyy
Lana chapter 78 . 4/28/2020
OMG I love this story! It took me several days to finish it (which was great with being quarantined and all) and wow what a ride! The way you portrayed the characters was great and I loved the romance between Zuko and Katara. And the damn ;) I wish this could be canon lol. Anyway I'm off to read your other stories!

Stay safe!
TheScribeofLelouch chapter 48 . 4/20/2020
The only good thing this fic has are good Zutara romance and novel length dedicated plot. The characters, even the main characters and villains are one dimensional, the conflict is boring. Plot armour too often used.

Of course this high standard is because its compared to the amazing characters and plots of canon
cloudibabii chapter 1 . 4/8/2020
BEFORE I DIVE INTO THIS... What's the difference of me reading on this site and on AO3? I saw you have the story posted on both sites. Although I prefer this one, I would much rather read some smutty chapters in the long run :'))
Sak chapter 1 . 4/3/2020
Omg the feels! The pinning and the wanting! It is all ringing too true gwahh!
WRDT-old-find me on AO3 lol chapter 78 . 3/24/2020
I'm so happy and sad at the same time. happy that it was a happy ending (with twins) but sad its over. And ten years, yes! But good things (like this story) comes to those who wait. Thank you for this ending and the crap ton of kids they all had. I love it! thank you for finishing.
Lily chapter 78 . 3/12/2020
Aww that was such a sweet ending. This was a great story. I enjoyed reading it immensely. Thank you for writing this
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