|Reviews for Bittersweet|
| black to Leopard-colored eyes chapter 4 . 8/4/2009
i loke your imaginary line )
| Stronger than you since 1915 chapter 4 . 1/25/2009
:( what is with this chickie. what is she, she's obviously not human. update soon
| Stronger than you since 1915 chapter 3 . 1/24/2009
somewhat confusing. update soon.
| Stronger than you since 1915 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
| mutemockingjay chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Please, please, please fix your grammar.
And also, demanding reviews isn't very gracious. It looks rather obnoxious, honestly. You have potential but you could do better with describing. A writer is like a painter, only we paint with words instead of brushes. :)
I highly doubt it would ever be so cloudy in California being a native...but I am willing to supsend my disbelief if you improve.
Also, as a pointer, you don't need to write who's opint of view it is on the top. If you have done your job correctly we should be able to figure it out. Also, why would they be in high school if Bella has already had Renesmee?
P.S.- You spelt weird wrong in the title. You might want to fix that.
| Eillac chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
This is cool. I bet Alice will LOVE California...
| barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
sounds good s far