|Reviews for Father and Daughter Moments|
| whats that a hat chapter 4 . 2/22/2010
lol i love that part with the disney channel!
| KarlaAndTaniaAreImmortal chapter 3 . 6/2/2009
lol the end! haha
| Holy Frog 001 chapter 4 . 1/28/2009
This is a lovely story! I love father daught moments. You need to work on your grammer but other then that you've got gold!
| Ethrael chapter 4 . 11/29/2008
Edward makes a great daddy! -
| ifairyu chapter 4 . 11/14/2008
HAHAHAHA! XD! SSOO DISNEY CHANNEL! HILARIOUS! I WOULD NEVER THINK OF THEM DOING SOMETHING SO CHILDISH! BUT THAT WAS HYSTERICAL! JUST IMAGINE THEM DOING THAT! ROFL!
| SlashFreak101 chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
oh god that was hilarious. i loved it all it was totally awesome! -giggling like mad- i loved those father daughter moments that were so lacking in BD. thank you. so much.
| Livy Alice chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Hmm, your grammar isn't very good and your punctuation could use a bunch of work. Perhaps you should get a beta. They work wonders if you find a good one.
Also, writing in IM or shortening words just isn't very fun to read and it lessens the respect readers have for the author.
But the concept of the story is AMAZING. Very fun idea to have Nessie and Edward share special moments. Keep practicing!
| A is for Angel chapter 4 . 9/13/2008
i loved this chapter so much
| Blair Cullen chapter 3 . 9/9/2008
aw update soon
| EdwardCorvin17 chapter 3 . 9/9/2008
Haha awkward situation there for Edward and for Nessie! I really like it; please update soon!
| A is for Angel chapter 3 . 9/9/2008
i love this story
love it so much!