Reviews for Dangerous Affections |
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sweetypie200494 chapter 21 . 9/1/2009 This story is so good! Sadly I almost didn't read it. But I am very glad I did. I cried at least twice. Shame on me. I am very sorry to hear that people tried to ripe off your plot. How selfish of them. I am glad you choose to continue and am looking forward to reading more of your stories. Is this story over? Please let me know I am definently adding you as a favorite. Have fun in Cali! |
NeverThink chapter 22 . 8/31/2009 i read this story i long time ago... when there was only chapter 18... after that i got disconnected..kinda... with fanfic... when i go bak on i stumbled upon this story .. it sounded googd so i started to read it and them i realized...HOLY SHIT i already read this ... n now i finished and OMG u left it there ... that was evil my friend... all u fanfic authors are the same... u ppl all leave cliffhangers to torture us poor poor readers with... so please for the sake of my sanity update soon rawr! |
juliaSwan chapter 22 . 8/31/2009 gah!1 update! |
ultracat75 chapter 22 . 8/31/2009 Oh no! Not the kitty! I'm hugging my own kitties now as tears stream down my brokenhearted face. I know Bauer was only an immaginary kitty, and that he helped move the story along brilliantly, but I'm still so upset! Bella was getting a little too used to being safe. The resort would have thought that she and Edward were already married. She just wasn't thinking. So creepy! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
ultracat75 chapter 21 . 8/31/2009 Shew! Thank goodness they've come back to each other. It's all so heartbreaking! Great stuff though. :) |
ultracat75 chapter 20 . 8/31/2009 Oh no! Baby Cullen! That is so sad! Oh no, not Jake and Leah too! That has to be wrong. That's gotta be the "Leah's dad died instead" New Moon misunderstanding all over again. Man, how long are they going to be on the run for? Yikes! This is so crazy! :) |
ultracat75 chapter 19 . 8/31/2009 Fuck. I hate when this happens! Why can't people just come up with their own stories? Ugg... I hate it when people plaigerize. I'm so sorry about this. I hope this doesn't deter you from finishing your excellent story and writing even more! You're so close to the end. Don't let this one idiot ruin your fun. :) |
ultracat75 chapter 18 . 8/31/2009 Damn! How is Edward even still breathing after all of that? I'm exhausted after just reading it! So so cool that Bella got to save Edward's life in the end. Gah, I'm just so in awe of this story and all of the twists and turns you've written into it! So amazing. :o) |
ultracat75 chapter 17 . 8/31/2009 Gah! Where is Edward? He's gotta hurry up and save the day! |
ultracat75 chapter 16 . 8/31/2009 What the? How did Jacob get her cell phone number? I thought that Edward was the only one who had it. Hmm... Wow, this chapter was jam-packed with craziness, in a good way! Dang, I hope everyone's okay in the end! I like how you've made it like the book. It did make more sense for Bella to go with Jasper & Alice. Nicely done! |
ultracat75 chapter 15 . 8/31/2009 Holy crap! What's going on! Has Edward been shot? Has anyone else been shot? Whoa! |
ultracat75 chapter 14 . 8/30/2009 Shew! Thank goodness your New Moon section only lasted 6 hours. Hee! Their first time was great! I loved how awkward it was at first, but then they did their thing. ;) |
ultracat75 chapter 13 . 8/30/2009 Yay! They're in love and they know it! They're not afraid to show it. Sorry, this chapter is making me rhyme. Hee hee! It was so sweet. Oh! This whole time, I'm thinking... this will never work, because of that GPS. Edward's just going to have to remove it somehow. Otherwise, the Volturi are going to wonder why he's over at Bella's house all the time. Yikes, what's going to happen! |
ultracat75 chapter 12 . 8/29/2009 Ah... he's back home safe. I love it how they're so in love already. Nice therapy session too! Hee hee. |
ultracat75 chapter 11 . 8/29/2009 Yay! They kissed! I hope they can make this work somehow, these crazy kids! It seems like they're going to have to somehow take out the Volturi themselves. Yikes! I can't wait to see where this is headed! :) |