|Reviews for It's a long way to fall|
| Ammaviel chapter 39 . 9/8/2013
It was beautiful simply beautiful. I nearly cried at the end.
| Elphaba'sGirl chapter 39 . 7/7/2013
I like this story. Nice job.
| Fae the Queen chapter 29 . 12/10/2012
Frex seems to be unable to keep the line between reality and fantasy separated any more... its fairly disturbing I can only wonder what that means he is going to do to Elphaba
| Review408 chapter 39 . 7/14/2012
Wow this is one of my favorites! Really great work! My favorite part about this are the blue dimonds tattoos. I find it so sweet how you did that. I wishyou would do another fyiero/elphaba fic
| Wicked4life chapter 9 . 5/28/2012
| Wicked4life chapter 8 . 5/28/2012
I love how it's not the usual arranged mariagge thing. Much more realistic.
| Wicked4life chapter 7 . 5/28/2012
I love it!
| Wicked4life chapter 5 . 5/28/2012
very very well done. Impressive.
| Deadliest Priestess chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
One of the best FiyeroXElphaba stories EVER!
| wickedozgirl chapter 39 . 11/23/2011
This was such a good story, I enjoyed it so much! You are such a talented writer :)
The last paragraph made me cry. It's so sad, but so romantic!
| RomanticSoul693 chapter 39 . 9/17/2011
Wow. Such an AMAZING story! You wrote each character perfectly! And i definitely cried at the end of the epilogue. So beautiful!
| Miss Rose Weasley chapter 20 . 5/21/2011
great story... confusing ending.
| 3Mindy3 chapter 39 . 5/8/2011
Oh dear, you nearly ripped my heart out when I read the line about Fiyero dying, and then Elphaba.
I loved how different a fate she had from the musical, when EVERYONE mourned her death. Nessa's fate was sad because I typically am a Nessa supporter, but she should have listened to Elphaba.
Part of this story I liked was when Morrible was unable to lure Elphie to the Emerald City, literally, because of Fiyero. Things would have been so different otherwise. He's her savior.
At first I was mad at you for sending Galinda to the Emerald City because I thought she would fall into the same trap Elphaba did, but THANKFULLY that didn't happen. GO GALINDA! I also kind of liked how she stayed Galinda, I don't know why. When she was saying "I'm special" that seriously warmed my heart! For awhile I thought she and Loxin would get together, oh well.
This story had it all, the Frex drama (for some reason I really like reading stories with Frex causing trouble) was different and unlike everything else I've read, disturbing yes, but creative.
The Elphaba and Galinda friendship was dead-on throughout the whole thing, very in character, especially in those first few chapters. It warmed my heart on several occasions :)
And of course, of course, the Fiyerba. Thank you for not having it be "love at first sight". I honestly can't really stand that...they fell in love at the perfect pace and they TOLD each other they fell in love at the perfect pace.
I think one of my favorite scenes was the Ozdust because I liked reading about Elphaba's confused feelings and agony. My favorite part, however, was when Fiyero told Elphaba about the diamonds and what it meant for them. That was so romantic.
I repeat, you are a fantastic author! I encourage you to write another Wicked story if you ever get an idea, I'll read it!
Once again, Mindy
| 3Mindy3 chapter 34 . 5/7/2011
Oh my gosh...I hate Frex! I hate him hate him...pity him...wait NO! I hate him...and sort of feel bad for him. Though it IS disturbing, all of this seems fairly realistic. I don't see Frex as the most stable person, and Elphaba is basically a green Melena.
I'm reviewing because I have to stop reading for the night until tomorrow...*tear* and I wanted to write down all my thoughts before I forgot them.
Anyway, this story continues to surprise me!
| 3Mindy3 chapter 27 . 5/7/2011
I'm totally aware that this story was finished a long time ago but I just wanted you to know that I'm SMILING LIKE AN IDIOT RIGHT NOW! This story has everything that I look for in a story, and right now I'm floating on happy juice. Let me say this, it's really rare for me to be this enthusiastic about fanfiction. I usually say "aww...how sweet..." and leave it at this. You've captured the Fiyerba perfectly, this is exactly what I needed. This literally gave me butterflies...just...ahh! I love this story so much!
*goes to read the rest*