|Reviews for Just wait till I get my hands on him!|
| ol2bob chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Loved it! It was so well-written..
"Edward, you are a strange young man...first, you fall in love with the first girl you have ever dated..." - LOL... you have no idea Charlie... or maybe you do.. hahaha
Edward delighted with the vision of the scene-when he and Bella are lounging on the beach in Cancun dazzling the drunken college students with his sparkling light show.- that image.. and the fact that Edward finds it funny... makes it even funnier... haha
Edward's head began to swim with the abundant irony, "Alice is not going to believe this, first Jacob is a dog, and now I am an old man..."- I love the irony.. and Edward's commentaries!