Reviews for Monster: Edward's POV
UnfortunatelyAddicted chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Ah. Poor Edward. It's excellantly written but you need to include more description of his feelings - SM describes him as having tortured eyes and Edward would only have to read Jacob's thoughts to know what Jacob saw he looked like. But other than that, good going!
ritz27 chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
that was a really nice one!..i enjoyed reading it!
Indil Elondili chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I like this a lot! I can't wait to read more!
caz15th chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Beautiful. Simply...wonderful. You connect with Edward so well!
Love.peace.equality chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
I love how you added that little scene at the end. Pure Bella and Edward.