|Reviews for Ashes|
| MidnightxRed chapter 9 . 10/10/2008
Woah, this is so good (:
And aww... he died.. and she lived. that would be terrible. She doesn't even know what she is. Its so sad .
And it is described so well (:
I love it!
| boredwriter272 chapter 9 . 10/9/2008
This is, once again, awesome. So depressing... Also, this sentence needs editing, it makes no sense.
Did the monster that had attacked Charles and I killed Charles and somehow forever altered me?
| NightShade Tears chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Hm. Interesting. What you can find by just browsing!
I'd never seen a before-the-series story about Vicki...well done!
Expecting more great writing
| Variety-3 chapter 9 . 10/9/2008
Loving this more and more. Ren, I love how you captured Victoria's pain in her disjointed thoughts, and now her confusion at waking up to this new life. Great job.
| Maye Faire chapter 7 . 10/6/2008
Nice. Keep on writing.
| MidnightxRed chapter 8 . 10/6/2008
this was so GOOD!
And aww.. she can't have kids and then she gets attacked and then Charles gets killed .
so sad but it so good
| boredwriter272 chapter 8 . 10/5/2008
Wow. This is great. I prefer this style to that of your other chapters. Very poetic.
| ishha chapter 8 . 10/5/2008
I actually cried while reading this chapter.
Very good chapter though...but still sad.
| ishha chapter 5 . 10/5/2008
| ishha chapter 4 . 10/5/2008
cool that you added carlise in this story.
| graciousplum chapter 8 . 10/5/2008
Wow! That was very intense. I wonder who changed her? Some stranger vampire just passing through? Had he or she been stalking them. That would be creepy.
| Paprika012345 chapter 8 . 10/5/2008
no! crap! how could he die from a vampire? that's cruel irony. update soon!
| star struck lovers chapter 8 . 10/5/2008
hey i just wanted to say that i admire your writing style.
your very eloquent and i find myself drawn into your storyline of victorias life before twilight, a very interesting angle to write from. keep up the great work!
| MidnightxRed chapter 7 . 10/1/2008
That was so sweet how he defended her (:
I love this story and i can't wait for more.
| Variety-3 chapter 7 . 9/30/2008
Ren darling, you're as talented as ever. And keeping me from my studying with a great rendition of Victoria. I can't wait to read what you have in store for her.