Reviews for Regaining Innocence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() thank you it was a good one |
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![]() ![]() ![]() it was a good one thank you |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story, and NOW I understand how the whole male pregnancy thing works, except there are a few technicalities, but eh. It works for the story. Anyways, I liked it over all. Not a big slash fan, but you did it well enough to be enjoyable. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() you made me CRY... *sniffs and wipes eyes* i hate you :( (continues reading) |
![]() ![]() This was... not good. There was no action at all, just "lookee, I am preggers yet agin" and "let's guess who get's laid next". Dull, and dreadfully so. Too bad you couldn't keep up the pace from the previous story! Add to that all the typos and the horrible sentence structure, and you get one story that's not to be recommended. Too bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the third time I've read this story, and I cry every time I read this chapter. Especially when he says "Dad tell him I didn't lose the baby" |