Reviews for Substitute
Pandora chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Omg this needs to be so much more than just a one shot!:")
Litschi chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Very well written! _

But it could have had more dramatic in it, would have loved it!

Good story!
Pink Bead Girl chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
With relatively few words you have painted such an eloquent picture. You made me feel so sad and wistful in such a delightful way. Poor Kain, once again stoic, dependable and so giving of himself, you captured him perfectly. Thankyou.
C. L. Kellen chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
that was so amazingly cute! oh my god, i love it! you're an amazing author and kainXruka is definitely one of the best pairings!
Show Me the Skyline chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
ahh I loved this!
denticity chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Oh, wow.

This was so beautifully touching, I can't put words to the feeling it produced.

You've done so well to capture everything between these two - brilliant.

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Konoha's White Fang chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
So touching! I don't know why but each time I read a Kain/Ruka story I would feel so sad :(

The relationship between those two is so sad!
BE4UTIFUL chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
I really like it. This has always been one of my favorite scenes in the story and you developed it well. I liked the "Ivory teeth pierced pale flesh, damning them both." line best.
Flamboyant Flower chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
I really like the way you wrote this. I thought Ruka's request was a strange thing for her to say, but somehow you made it work _ Will you continue his, I'd really like t osee how the deal with it
NeonDreams chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Wow, I just loved that. These two are so perfect together...
dragontamer16 chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
That was cool. I loved how it ended!
ShhListen chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
ahh...finally a decent one shot...

really goodd
miarath chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Oh, wow! This is just so sweet and deep. I love it. Loved the tenderness and sadness in this piece. I really hope so that Ruka is going to be strong enough to eventually tell him what she's feeling. :D

Well-done.
Following Padfoot's Pawprints chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
~This is Queen Sparkle, not Padfoot, just so you know~

That was AMAZING! I love this pairing! It's really good as a oneshot but I can't help but wish you would write more. I really like your writing style, even if I hadn't liked it, I would have had to finish it. Well done!
carzla chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Kain/Ruka is my favourite HeT pairing in VK! And I loved this take on them! Usually, it's Kain with the unrequited love and Ruka being oblivious about it. While I like that, cause I'm a sucker for angst, it's nice to see new twists to this pair!

I like it that this time, it's Kain who hasn't been able to see that Ruka has feelings towards him now. Cause Kain's always been pretty sensitive to others, especially Ruka. Now, all I wish is that canon does more than just hint at the pairing. XD
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