Reviews for Disturbia
minipoison chapter 5 . 9/28/2008
edward is an ass (please excuse language) i hate him

morning-fight chapter 5 . 9/24/2008
so intense!

i love love love it so much.

thank you.
Raven500 chapter 5 . 9/17/2008

you cheated.

but that was really good, violent and really sad, you would think they wouldn't go together but this did it...
britt chapter 5 . 9/14/2008
poor jacob
watermelonflavored chapter 5 . 9/14/2008

ugh i hate that edward did that

well at least i know now wat happened to her memory and jake...
Tamza chapter 5 . 9/14/2008
jesus christ! that was pretty violent lol

omg edward actully injoyed teariing jacob apart god almighty that was a shcker to me now off to read that chapter from superbia
berrykool chapter 5 . 9/13/2008
wow this chapter was really intense. i am just really hating edward right now! he totally destroyed jacob AND then lied about it! poor bella she had to see the whole thing! Jacob was just trying to suck the poison out of her! aww i am really depressed:( but im gonna go read superbia now and hopefully that will make me happy!lol

just one question did they know she was supposed to loose her memory because jasper said "So this is how she looses her memory?"


but this was a really good story i am glad you wrote it!
berrykool chapter 4 . 9/13/2008
OH! NO! whats going to happen next~!
ecaniaga chapter 5 . 9/13/2008
I hate Edward.
YouAreMyLifeNow1009 chapter 5 . 9/13/2008
You are a genius, thank you for this story and the explanations
gemin chapter 5 . 9/13/2008
Ohh my GOD. I am shocked. I had a feeling it was Edward who killed Jacob, but wow. That was so ridiculous, I want to throttle Edward, to say the least. This was a great companion story, you did the death of Jacob Black good. Sigh. Jake. Bella is going to be pissed...I'm going to go read that now...
HeavenlyAngel14 chapter 5 . 9/13/2008
EDWARD KILLED JAKE! I didn't see that coming at all! Poor Jake, poor Bella. Ugh I'm really losing my patience with Edward! I'm slightly confused though, was it the werewolf saliva that made her lose her memory? I'm glad that Jake's death has been explained though - I was really curious about it. But I never uimagined this. Edwards such a liar!
Angeliss chapter 5 . 9/13/2008
I was... I was right. I... oh, god. Edward deserves to die. He /enjoyed/ it. Poor Jacob. Poor Jasper, who knows how much his death would have hurt Bella. Poor Carlisle, who was forced to watch. And poor Bella, who now has to live with this...

But don't apologize! I refuse to hear it! Lalalalalalala...

Seriously, though, this does not deserve an apology. It was fabulously done, although my leg does hurt now...

Unfortunately, my mom is dragging me off to the eye doctor (not really. Since I am over 18, I would have to pay for an exam, but she's offering, and I can't refuse.) so I can't read Superbia until I get back. Sigh.
watermelonflavored chapter 4 . 9/12/2008
only one ch that ok as long as it explains wat happened to him
watermelonflavored chapter 3 . 9/12/2008
soo sad, and jakes is still coming ugh
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