|Reviews for Queen Anne's Lace|
| mumrulz chapter 3 . 9/22/2008
This was a very sensuous & poetic chapter...from the talk of her being the forbidden fruit...to Brennan declaring herself, his...to the words Booth uses to describe how he sees her...to the words that Brennan uses to describe what he has done for her...all leading to the sensual blossoming lovemaking.
** He ached to touch her, taste her, be with her, inside her, make her call out his name in that moment of release when the world seemed to contract around them and only they existed for that instant
...loved this...it just gives off the feeling that Booth is overwhelmed...wanted to be overwhelmed, needed to be overwhelmed by Temperance Brennan.
**Though she’d always called him an alpha male, comparing him to a wolf wasn’t entirely accurate. He was more a cat on the prowl.
...funny that, exactly what I was picturing, when at the beginning of the chapter Booth was circling Brennan, but not touching her...a panther circling it's prey...waiting for the perfect moment to pounce. LOL.
**“It was worth every moment.”
...& so was reading this fic...shame it was only 3 chapters long. :-):-):-)
| Aching Bones chapter 3 . 9/22/2008
Wow!..wow! wow! wow!...This was wonderful...So sensual, so erotic, so teasing and tempting and so so so hot! Loved it...From start to finish I was mesmorised, unable to breath at times with your wonderful words...
I could quote everything I loved in it forever, but I will quote just a few here now...
'He ached to touch her, taste her, be with her, inside her, make her call out his name in that moment of release when the world seemed to contract around them and only they existed for that instant'...
'He wanted to know how close Temperance was to temptation? Temptation was right in front of her and she’d resisted it for long enough'...
'Don’t you understand Booth? You’ve had knowledge of me since the day we met. I’m not a temptation. I’m yours'...
'Your hands hold endless fascination for me, and I’ve often wondered what it would feel like to have you sweep them over me with the same care you show those people you give voices to. What would it be like to have all of your attention and care on me, so focused that I am the only thing to exist in your world?'...
'Booth gulped as his eyes swept over her curves, her most intimate areas covered in black silk. He reached out a hand to feel the smoothness of her skin, his tongue darting out to wet his suddenly parched lips'...
'Booth dropped to his knees before Brennan, his arms wrapped around her waist, his face buried against her abdomen. She ran her fingers through his hair, holding him close to her and shut her eyes, relishing the moment. “You have healed me, and for that, I’m yours'...
'“I’ve dreamt of having you for too long, convinced myself that you were out of reach, that piece of forbidden fruit beckoning me to just take a bite. The only thing is, I don’t want to settle for one bite. I want the whole thing'...
'I want you to make me feel the way you see me'...
'He was more a cat on the prowl. He’d been a sniper, he was an ambush hunter stalking his prey until just the right moment when he’d pounce.'...
'There was something in this moment, something that held her gaze to him as the world around them blurred and came into sharper focus all at once. Every sense was alive, hyper stimulated by their connection'...
Again I loved it...You write so well...I love all your stories but you really have surpassed yourself with this one...
'It sure was worth every moment'...
| sunsetLover chapter 3 . 9/22/2008
Booth never appealed to me as a poetic man...but the way you wrote it, it was as if the scene was unfolding in front of me and their words just rolling out of their tongue as if I was watching the tv series...love this fic so much...too bad it's only 3 chapters...but I really enjoyed it..Looking forward to more of your fics:)
| sunsetLover chapter 2 . 9/22/2008
another awesome chapter and i'm learning a lot:) thank you:)
| sunsetLover chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
WOW! I must say I enjoy that. I wouldn't mind you lecturing me the whole day about American or World literature:)..You are so good in this craft:) I better head to 2nd chapter now...I'm so impressed:)
| K.E. Scrubbed chapter 3 . 9/21/2008
That was... wow. To use a phrase I often say but rarely type... "Damn, son." It was so poetic, and at the same time, just plain hot. Very well done. :)
| TheLifeILive chapter 3 . 9/21/2008
Wow...that was beautiful. I don't think I've read something more poetically written in a very long time.
When Booth was describing what he sees when he looks at her...I could melt.
That was amazing!
| HawkAngel XD chapter 3 . 9/21/2008
oh my, poetry is so hot when it said, that way... oh my! I want a poet like Booth... x33... awesome, perfect perfect!
| Kriti chapter 2 . 9/21/2008
oh wow!i loved the end!...u can actually feel the tension and chemistry and desire...just like the last chapter!great work!eagerly eagerly waiting for more...update soon pl.!thnk u for posting this up!
| Kriti chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
that was absolutly brilliant!its been so long since i've read something of this level...and phew!heloo!that scene with Booth/Bones...wow!...and stories delving into literature are always the one's i've liked more than the rest,english a favourite of mine as well...and hats off for that amazing poem!it was amazing...fabulous!so i havent looked up the poet yet so i don't know,but if the poem is by u does that mean the poet is a fictional character too?...but seriously...i had to leave a review after this chapter...i enjoyed every minute of it!...now im off to complete chapter 2(i came back to leave a review for this chapter as well instead of leaving one after chap.2 to tell u how much im loving this!)update more soon pl.!thanks!
| ForAReason chapter 2 . 9/19/2008
Dammit! It's cutting me off again. *angry face* The rest of my review...
“You, Temperance are the fruit of the tree of the knowledge of good and evil, a temptation I shouldn’t engage in.”
Hot! My favorite line. :-) Give in, dammit! Give in!
My one gripe - I cannot stand ee cummings! LOL. I can't read anything in all lowercase, no punctuation. Drives me absolutely bananas. So I had to skip it. Hehe. Suffice it to say, I liked your poem better. ;-)
Looking forward to the temptation-yielding. :-D
| ForAReason chapter 2 . 9/19/2008
Well I'll review, but I read it the first day. ;-) I was getting back to it, I promise. ;-p It was a hit and run that day as I was swamped at work and knew I'd be back to read. I loved the flower meaning talk.
| wolfmyjic chapter 2 . 9/19/2008
Ah! You left it there? Oh come on, Goldy...give me more. Tell Jaed to hurry up and beta already...or there'll be a mob with torches hunting her down.
| wolfmyjic chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
First..."graphic novel"...good working that in.
Second, Damn, that was good :)
| Pipergirl chapter 2 . 9/19/2008
Gah *drools* Poetry just knocked Booth's sexiness to 11...
Please tell me he wears reading glasses, too ;)