|Reviews for Return to me|
| alex chapter 28 . 12/14/2013
make it 10 years later for return to me
| fanatic1010 chapter 28 . 10/26/2011
looooooove iiiiiit! Amazing job well done. Cant wait for your sequel.
| InuFan21497 chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
This is great story. I'm glad I read it. I'll be looking for more of your stories!
| kagomefanbiggestfan chapter 28 . 2/16/2011
| Kaylin Neya of Elantra chapter 28 . 1/19/2011
This story was pretty good, I can't wait for a sequel (if your still gonna write one) :) One thing that i noticed tho was that in the chapter when kagome's finally waking after talking with midoriko is that at the beginning a week had passed but the 2nd or 3rd paragraph (or around ther) it was only the day after the encounter with niraku... Not sure if i read wrong lol... Just a heads up :-) good luck with future writing!
| Kaylin Neya of Elantra chapter 6 . 1/15/2011
How dare u leave a cliffy... lol just kidding... this is pretty good so far, the amnesia thing is new :-)compared to other stories... i'm just glad i don't have to wait lol (felt like leaving a message anyway!)
| Stormywinterdays chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
wow, i neva saw these 2 as a couple but happnd 2 c dz stry dz is the 1st chapter so i c if i like it or nt ;)
| Elizabeth Roses chapter 23 . 10/26/2010
oh crap now Kagome can dream about the future! oh snap
| Elizabeth Roses chapter 17 . 10/26/2010
future food inuyoukai addicted dog.
| Dagger-Seishin chapter 28 . 9/22/2010
| WickedXLove chapter 28 . 7/16/2010
I jsut looked and the last time u updated this was on my birthday! July 23. tee hee
| Jasmine Smith chapter 28 . 7/14/2010
This story is awesome and blew me away like no other story has before(This is a good thing.) I think that you should make a sequel.I'm sorry that that writing stories and posting them up on .net cuts into your college schedule, but the stories you write are can improve on descriptions and i didn't know what Takani looked like but i imagined him to be in a dark cloak with red eyes and a muscular body with a scheming look on his face when he is a scale of one to ten i would rate this a 8.9, i choose this rating because this story lacked in showing through actions what everybody's personality was like. To make it better i think that if, a person who had never read or watched Inuyasha before would be able to easily understand the story & plot line and each character's personality then i would give you a 10. This was not the best story i have read on .net but it certainly isn't the worst.
I would think that you worked hard on this and put effort into it based on the fact that i couldn't find a single grammatical or spelling error in the story. One confusing part was why Naraku absorbed Takani and his plan to defeat Inuyasha and company along with with why it failed.
I have tried to make the improvements that need to be done clear and if you have any question contact me ASAP!
Please don't take any critique offensively cause I'm just trying to help you.
Please keep in contact and continue writing and posting on .net!
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Hasta la vista!:D
| Condello1989 chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
I CANT READ ANYTHING ABOVE CHAPTER 6 FOR SOME REASON! AND IT JUST GOT GOOD! DANG IT! I LOVE THIS STORY!
| bloodytears162008 chapter 28 . 4/22/2010
dramitic love scene !
i love this u have to write more PLZ !
Everyones gonna stalk u if u dont write more lol ... u gonna make us cry
| Andromada-Morningstar chapter 12 . 4/6/2010
that was the opitomy of irony! shippo goes through but not inu? lolz!