|Reviews for Retinue|
| MoonShadows717 chapter 7 . 4/13
I wonder if you will still continue this.
This story is incredible. The pacing is good, the characterization is believable considering the circumstances. Even your first lemon didn't sound corny. It was hot.
Now I'm hooked and I want to know... what then? What happens after?
Hope we can hear from you. Even after all these years.
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/27
6 years late aye? Shame this was never finished i was really enjoying it.
| ForestWolf11 chapter 7 . 1/11
Hey! This is awesome! Please keep writing. It would be cool to see Tenten return to Konaha pregnant and Sauske returns to the village after killing Itachi and falls in love with her. I offer you love and gratitude to any and all Tenten fanfic writer as I don't think she gets enough screen time
| Matsudappoiyo chapter 7 . 12/22/2015
This story is really great and well thought out; I ,honestly, can't write as well as you can. I enjoy the characters, I enjoy the plot, and *ahem*, I (kinda) enjoyed the lemon.
Really wish you can continue. :D
| Lenora Jime chapter 7 . 8/3/2015
I wonder if you would ever update this. The plot is intriguing although I'm a bit confused as to why tenten didnt try to escape since they reached the fire country, I'm sure there would be some of konoha's nins around there.
Anyway thanks for good read and I hope you would update this. See ya :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/26/2014
i like the use of the kunai-totally a turn on for tenten-hardly anyone thinks of it.
i really love this story and am waiting for the next chapter.
| secretslockedintheheart chapter 7 . 7/3/2014
what happens next?
please i want to know.
| Aprilknight97 chapter 7 . 12/30/2013
WHERE THE HECK ARE YOU?! Its been 3 years :( I really like the story. And I cant wait to see how you will continue the story. COME BACK! Sasuke just had to ruin the moment and say that it wasn't love but an agreement. Tenten must be sad that he said that.
| Taiyalin chapter 7 . 12/30/2013
Spectacular story. Ive been re-reading it eeverytie I come upon this pairing. Sasuten isnt an avenue greatly explored and it really should!
You haven't updated in a long while. Hope you didnt drop it
| toxic click chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
I just started reading this, and all I can say is: EXCELLENT! And the lemon (why is it called that, by the way?) Very steamy. I hope you updat soon. And I actually like this pairing, and I feel that Tenten doesn't get enough credit. But anyway, job well done. :)
| Alan chapter 7 . 6/15/2013
quite the story so far...and please dont ever make this a nejiten, its great this way. I think sas/ten has a great potential, couse lets face it...pink haired uchiha babies? no way in hell..soo we wanna an update ! D
| alleka chapter 7 . 4/1/2013
Hey , soy hispanohablante y quiro que sepas que aun así me doy tiempo para leerlo, para no abrumarte con traducciones pesadas...
Congratulations! I love it
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/11/2013
lol dont listen i love sas/ten keep up the good work
| AwesomPossums chapter 7 . 11/24/2012
Can't remember if I already reviewed or not... But this story is absolutely bloody amazing! I keep reading it over and over again...
I think the people asking for nejiten are ridiculous.. Obviously the pairing is Sasuten... People these days are just... Preposterous...
Luv ya, mean it!
| AwesomePossums chapter 7 . 8/7/2012
Hi! New reader here!
I think you definitely pass the standard for a lemon here at because your lemon ranks pretty high on my lists of lemons that I have read...
And I hope the people who thought this would be NejiTen finally woke up because ever since the beginning of the story, I knew it would SasuTen... AND they're actually compatible... ;D