Reviews for Retinue
Lenora Jime chapter 7 . 8/3
I wonder if you would ever update this. The plot is intriguing although I'm a bit confused as to why tenten didnt try to escape since they reached the fire country, I'm sure there would be some of konoha's nins around there.
Anyway thanks for good read and I hope you would update this. See ya :)
Guest chapter 7 . 11/26/2014
i like the use of the kunai-totally a turn on for tenten-hardly anyone thinks of it.
i really love this story and am waiting for the next chapter.
secretslockedintheheart chapter 7 . 7/3/2014
what happens next?
please i want to know.
Aprilknight97 chapter 7 . 12/30/2013
WHERE THE HECK ARE YOU?! Its been 3 years :( I really like the story. And I cant wait to see how you will continue the story. COME BACK! Sasuke just had to ruin the moment and say that it wasn't love but an agreement. Tenten must be sad that he said that.
Taiyalin chapter 7 . 12/30/2013
Spectacular story. Ive been re-reading it eeverytie I come upon this pairing. Sasuten isnt an avenue greatly explored and it really should!
You haven't updated in a long while. Hope you didnt drop it
toxic click chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
I just started reading this, and all I can say is: EXCELLENT! And the lemon (why is it called that, by the way?) Very steamy. I hope you updat soon. And I actually like this pairing, and I feel that Tenten doesn't get enough credit. But anyway, job well done. :)
Alan chapter 7 . 6/15/2013
quite the story so far...and please dont ever make this a nejiten, its great this way. I think sas/ten has a great potential, couse lets face it...pink haired uchiha babies? no way in hell..soo we wanna an update ! D
alleka chapter 7 . 4/1/2013
Hey , soy hispanohablante y quiro que sepas que aun así me doy tiempo para leerlo, para no abrumarte con traducciones pesadas...
Congratulations! I love it
Guest chapter 7 . 1/11/2013
lol dont listen i love sas/ten keep up the good work
AwesomPossums chapter 7 . 11/24/2012
Can't remember if I already reviewed or not... But this story is absolutely bloody amazing! I keep reading it over and over again...
I think the people asking for nejiten are ridiculous.. Obviously the pairing is Sasuten... People these days are just... Preposterous...
Luv ya, mean it!
AwesomPossums
AwesomePossums chapter 7 . 8/7/2012
Hi! New reader here!
I think you definitely pass the standard for a lemon here at because your lemon ranks pretty high on my lists of lemons that I have read...
And I hope the people who thought this would be NejiTen finally woke up because ever since the beginning of the story, I knew it would SasuTen... AND they're actually compatible... ;D
7greenevilpuppies chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
I know u haven't updated in awhile and might not again but even so, I totally give ur lemon chapter a huge ass A, u so kick ass:D and I really like this pairing, it's clever
graceo12 chapter 7 . 6/13/2012
truth to be told i actually liked it so yea... it does pass the standard for a lemon! :) cheers!

update soon! :D
beauty chapter 7 . 4/15/2012
i love it i'm a big fan of sas/ten keep up the awesome work
Sweet96 chapter 7 . 3/26/2012
It is amazing I am a fan of NejiTen but SasuTen is also one of my favorite couples and may I just say keep on the good work and I hope for more chapters because you are amazing :DDD
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