|Reviews for vroom vroom|
| Cielenny chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
| drain-rocks chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
great story, I loved the last sentence D
| TryToTry chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Ok, that was amazingly adorable. Good job, I'm usually a picky reader, but I really liked it.
| ricetard chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
aww, that was so cute! xD style ftw! [
| eishi chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Short and incredibly sweet, indeed. The "fireman"-idea was cutely executed, and Cartman's reasoning sounded just like him. ("To straighten him out"... Pfft, yeah, right.)
But, but, there were few spelling mistakes that irritated the reading a bit. E.g.
- "Hi!Welcome to Raisens, i'm Ferari!" - "Hi! Welcome to Raisins, I'm Ferrari!"
- "Uh, no more." Kyle would insist. - "Uh, no more," Kyle would insist.
- fingners - fingers
Nothing that can't be fixed, though. I hope you'll write more in this fandom, it really needs more Stan/Kyle-lovin'! XD
| DeadFuzz chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
hahahahahahahhahahahhaha I LUV IT! THATS SO CUTE AND ADORABLE AND OH I LUV UR WORK!
"You straigtened out now?" Stan asked, fingners fidgety in his pockets.
"Not. Even. Close."
"Good." Stan leaned over and kissed Kyle square on the mouth, hands in his pockets, akward angle.
one of the best one shots iv read in ages!
you are seriously cool dude!