|Reviews for Crash and Burn|
| Inthannon chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
I liked the story, but there are a few niggles I have. The ending seems a bit rushed and also if this is set in season eight like your AN at the beginning suggests, the ranks are wrong as in the second episode (New Order, part 2) of season eight Jack is promoted to brigadier general and Sam to a lieutenant colonel. However if it's set somewhere towards the end of season seven, all is well. :) Sorry for the nitpicking..
| Goomba chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
That was such an awful, un-satisfying conclusion. After all that, the brilliant build up, the tantelizing torment; you think that in only a handful of sentances and a "Night, night" the story's done? Oiy! It was beautiful and precious and I just feel so shafted at the end. Please, please PLEASE re-write the conclusion, with a little more of the emotion, effort and dedication that I feel you had when you started. Thanks and
| macisgate chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
That was really good! Nice job.
| LadyMo chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
This is really good and believable that Sam at some point would feel exactly that way. Very Good.
| sapphiretwin369 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Wow! Great job. I loved how you wrote the point of view, talking to Sam.
| Natters chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
| ascifigirl chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
| natalia5345 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
wow. just. wow. love love loved this. so well done i don't even have the words. love.
| BettyHall223 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Good story and well written.
| jhalya chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
this was just awesome and very IC! nice job:)
| PatriciaS chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Nice one. Thanks for sharing.
| Ellana-san chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
| LikeCheapWine chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Oh wow! This was awesome. The best thing I've read in a while ;-)
I just wished we would have seen that in real. Good job!
| A.M. Richardson chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
What a treat to read again - I really love this:
And the way she goes on about stamping her foot to stop the tears.
The convos are very IC - really well done x
PS You could post the post 'Death Knell' ep tag could you ::bats eyelashes::