Toreo chapter 16 . 4/9/2012
Your grammar is atrocious, even for a 15 year old.
nerdyfresh chapter 16 . 9/25/2011
reminds of my own stories. i mean i made parodies 2
Syn'ri chapter 16 . 6/19/2010
Yes, I must also say I have been known to make reviews that have...very bad grammar where I am trying to give others advice, but you know what I really hate. When others insert a steroid clone of themselves where they just magically appear in Naruto world and all the boys and/or girls fall in love with them. IT just makes me say..."Really?". It brings shame to Mary Sues.
yamithecardmaster chapter 16 . 4/16/2010
Ya, this is not only the most true thing I've ever read, it is also the funniest. Please make one of the way out there pairings (like GarHina seriously they never even talked to eachother or AkuHina, seriously Akumaru is a dog WHY would you do that, and my personal "faviorite" [sarcasim} Hinata and every member of the akatski at once) Send a message to all the crack pots out there. Thank you for your service
Hinaxanyone chapter 16 . 2/20/2010
I'm so glad that you wrote this chapter regardless of how short it is. And don't worry it's completely understandable about the school thing, happens to the best of us.

Anyways, great mini chapter and I am almost positive you will get more conscientious reviewers. (I know I'm watching my own spelling as I type.)
allconspirer chapter 16 . 2/12/2010
Mocking the reviewers now? Is no one safe from your cruel wit? BTW I've got a couple of new pet hates at the moment, it's stories where things are wildly implausible, i.e Naruto sang Karaoke to the one he loved but instead of singing to Sakura, he sang to Hinata, or, They played truth or dare and Naruto had to kiss Sasuke.

And then there's the customary Naruto has a daughter i.e. Naruto's daughter was so like him and she inhaled Ramen by the bowl full, she then went on to give everyone funny nicknames, Sasuke was duck butt, Kakashi was scarecrow etc,

Thanks for updating
Bloodgalore chapter 16 . 2/12/2010
Great. But you should have one chapter on saying that this story is discontinued. That is also something that you should never make!

Ok, never mind...

Nice horribly-spelled review on telling you to spell better! That's great. But, how can you even write like that?

Mock me more! Yayness!
PaulRap Raptor chapter 16 . 2/12/2010
I don't care.
Ryan Folswan chapter 16 . 2/12/2010
I like to pretend that such reviews are people attempting to be ironic. It helps me hold the hope that there ARE intelligent people on the internet.

Back on topic though, ever done a take on a Naruto fic. that is instantly side tracked by 7 pages of pointless 'LEE!- GAI-SENSEI!" dialogue?
megi52 chapter 16 . 2/12/2010
HaHa! I love this! Though I think the first chapter is by far the best. You know the type of story that really gets me? The ones where someone decides to randomly have a sleepover, and invites everyone, and crazy shit ensues. I mean really, do some poeple actually thinks that stuff makes any type of sense. Ohh and you know what else bugs me, really really bad summeries. I think you know the kind that I'm talking about. Anyway, Great job! Maybe some people will take the hint and stop writing crap...or at least spell check it. _

Waiting on more,

Hinaxanyone chapter 15 . 8/17/2009
oh thank you for that chapter! I'm not gonna lie, I was laughing since the very beginning while reading this, you have a way with words and grammar.

I can't wait for the next chapter.
deepxwriterxaboutxeverything chapter 15 . 7/1/2009
haha I hate ones like that! especially when a harem forms...*shudders*...I read a really bad first timer SasuSaku fic the other day *shudders* loved they way you spelled Sasuke as saucekay...m love some saucekay on my hotdogs...waiting till the next one :D
P5yCH0 chapter 15 . 7/1/2009
Where's "Sakura was standing, then Sasuke came and said "let's go for a date" when she said "sorry, but I suddenly decided I'll change from being Sasuke-fangirl to Naruto-fangirl" and run after Naruto" themed story?
Fury074 chapter 15 . 6/30/2009
Have you done MPREG yet?

Please update soon.
q chapter 7 . 6/30/2009
I can't read this one.
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