|Reviews for This gnawing feeling|
| Shirubagure chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Well this seemed fine to me already it was very good!
| Cygnus the Swan chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
If the Earl did destroy the heart, Allen would die; but if they won, he'd still die from the strain, which makes me sad. ;;
This was a nice story-fic-thing. Angst is my luff. owo;;
| kobalto chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
Yay for Allen angst! _
| clockworkclown chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
wow...you know i think about this idea all the time, and here you go an write it ! NICE!
i'ed love to see more!
| zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
| Windy Rein chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
I don't think it needs to be improved in anyway.. At least I can't seem to find anything to change, well, except that I think you've missed one 'to' in "we don’t have wander around", I think there should be one..
Storywise though, it's brilliant :) I think this flows somehow and just happens :)