Reviews for Caroline and the Big Move alternative episode 2
FFB0725 chapter 8 . 10/3/2016
FANTASTIC story! This should have been the ending to that series. Thanks.
FFB0725 chapter 7 . 10/3/2016
FFB0725 chapter 4 . 9/30/2016
Exactly what I thought when I took the time to understand the whole series. Why didn't they agree to give their relationship more time. The time to grow as a parent, father.
FFB0725 chapter 3 . 9/30/2016
That was such a HARD episode to watch!
Your Worshipfulness chapter 8 . 4/12/2010
I know this story is pretty old, but I've got to say as a writer I've always heard 'show, don't tell.' This story, all it does is tell. The pacing is all off too-there's never any time for anyone to process emotions or make decisions, just one dramatic revelation after another. I like the concept here, with Caroline actually standing up for what she wants, but the actual work itself needs a lot of help.

~Your Worshipfulness