Reviews for Jealousy
Ilaria Slytherin 16 chapter 1 . 1/25
Me wrike u...
LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
nice :D
greeneyed-angiebaby chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
lol, funny, I was positive that Harry was the torturee, and Severus was the torturer! What exactly did Severus do to make Harry so crazy?
wandamarie chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
wow it was a good one
Myra Bones chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
That. Was. Hot.

You've probably heard this a thousand times, but it really surprised me to see Harry on top. He's usually the submissive one, especially when he's with Sev. But I really liked it, too.
loverboysgirl chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
well then chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
...that was insanely hot. insanely. hot.

...the critique would be- the, how shall I say, positioning(?) was all fairly confusing. Like is his back against the wall now or his chest? Where did the chains come from all the sudden?

So after not being able to figure any of that out, I just kind of ignored it and focused on the sensual entertainment. There was plenty of that.

Wooh. Read that in a hot lustful rush.

Keep writing.

Ja ne

Ali-chan et Vani-chan chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
haha! never felt as confused as I just was XD I thought all along that Sev was the dominant and I did not understand why he was uttering his own name. lol It really killed it for me. Can't get back into it, but I'll read your other stories. Reread Damaged Goods and looooooooooooooved Mistletoe Kisses. XXX ali
Twilightfans chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
At the beginning of this, I seriously had thought that the roles were reversed... I thought he dominating one was Severus and the submissive one was Harry. But it's awesome, so it's all good!
memelovescaps chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
A friend of mine sent me this fic thinking I'd like it, AND SHE WAS RIGHT! It was incredible, one of the best one-shots I've ever read! And I liked how Harry was the jelous guy in the relationship, and not Severus, as well as I loved Severus accepting the fact that he is Harry's possession. It was truly surprising to be reading thinking that it was Severus the one who was "active" so to speak, and then find out that it was Harry. Great surprise, I loved it. Congrats! :)
court666 chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
This was insanely good. Really hard to find something that hasn't been done a million times. This fic really surprised me, and that made it very good. Bravo. *Claps for you*
kittyeh18 chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
It was hot. Anyways I decided to review for the hell of it and b/c I really liked your fic and its awesome that it originated as your dream! Wow, wish I could remember mine more vividly. Anyways your story was really good so thanks for writing it. :)
Lansara chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
That was So hot!
Alaie chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Like pretty much everyone (as you can see if you direct your gaze below!) I thought that the positions were reversed.. But this made it much much more interesting and, let's be honest.. squeal-worthy :D

I was just looking for something short to read before going to bed - and this was perfect :3 Favorited!

*Squeals*... *Coughs*
Spoon10488 chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Ummm... Hot! I thought it was harry as the submis and then I find out it was severus and I was like ah... Hot!

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