|Reviews for By Flashes Of Lightning|
| lapaxlove chapter 3 . 5/7/2014
Iike that you chose to use Near's voice to explain, and the way Sayu has a bigger role (I always felt she deserved a bigger role, and the way you played out their doomed tragic love was really good!
Makes me want to...weep!
| DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 3 . 10/2/2013
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you're wrong it DID make my eyes bleed! Or at least run out 50% of liquids in my body! NO! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?! HOW COULD YOU MAKE ME WANT TO SHIP THEM SO HARD IN ONLY THIRTY MINUTES?!
"With the death of one of the pair, perhaps the dance is over, but while one still lives the trace of the tune will remain."
You broke my heart with this...
"Where there is life there is hope, after all, however hidden it may be."
You shattered my heart with this...
excuse me, I will now go read as many Sayu/Mello fics from u as I can before I have to go
| DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 2 . 10/2/2013
Awwwwww...now I REALLY ship them...
| DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee...omigods you have no idea how much you're making me want to ship Mello/Sayu. This was brilliant and you did Near's voice so well that I can't help but want to keep reading.
I'll give you a more extensive summary of my love for this story later after I read the rest.
| Maiko Chinatsu chapter 3 . 8/21/2013
"Let down to a bad fic"?
It may be one of the most moving fics I've read here! I loved this! Thank you so much for posting.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
I LOVE this. It is honestly one of the most beautiful Death Note fics I have ever read.
I particularly love Near- he is so different from other people in how they handle their emotions. He makes a conscious decision not to over-think it, to accept it, keep it with him in an almost meditative way.
He is clear, honest, profound. He is certainly not emotionless, as I have seen far too much, but he does not dwell on his emotions. He is...just amazing. His relationship with Mello, the respect and understanding with Sayu, the analysis of something other people would find too strange to look into...he is completely astounding.
I've never considered MelloxSayu before but this I love. I love Sayu too, because she is a minor character but she also has a lot of abstract thought in that head of hers and it is kind of a shame it is not expanded on.
I'm sorry you never expanded on the story, but it is true that the distance between Near and the lovebirds makes it mystical. TT HEARTS.
| Jl chapter 3 . 1/27/2013
| kanata chapter 3 . 9/23/2011
wow. the near percpetive is unique and refreshing. thank you
| TheAravis chapter 3 . 7/14/2011
I like this.
It's a bit sad, of course, since nearly everything involved with the Death Note is laced with tragedy, but I really did like this.
| NightOfAThousandDreams chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
This was beautifully written. I love the idea of Near narrating the "undocumented" happenings between Mello and Sayu. The little email tidbits from Matt were good too. I was definitely in tears by the time I reached the end of the fic. It made me want to change things, so that Mello and Sayu would have indeed stayed together, happily.
But it's Death Note. No such things as "happily ever afters" in that fandom :P
| Sepsis chapter 3 . 1/19/2011
| hjfdkg chapter 3 . 12/24/2010
How, how, HOW can you be so harsh on yourself? It wasn't crappy, it wasn't a let-down, and it certainly wasn't forgettable. It was beautiful.
Your prose is astonishing and clear; you never lay it on too thick or make your descriptions sound sappy, but the images still stick in mind. And, holy God, this IS Near: Linear, analytical, straightforward, honest, clear and precisely NEAR. How do you do that? How do you write a beautiful love story involving two of the most contradictory characters in the series, narrated by the most emotionless guy you'll ever meet, and make the audience still feel invested? You are a gifted story teller, and this left a huge lump in my throat.
It was honestly wonderful. :)
| schnook chapter 3 . 5/30/2010
This is nothing short of brilliant. The characterization and pain leaking through this piece is outstanding. Loved it to the last word.
| holographic chapter 3 . 5/10/2010
Holy .. holy shit. I can't even begin to describe how much I adored this story. It's just amazing.
The timeline feels so real and true to the story, Near is so in-character that how he speaks is almost haunting, and Sayu is portrayed to beautifully that it's absolutely wonderful.
I love how the emotion boils right under the surface, like there's so much Near himself is struggling with but can't say out of respect for their story, and how he continues. I love how he just comes out with things, and doesn't trip over his uncertainty, and the reason why Sayu doesn't speak just .. feels so beautiful and tragic.
Aasjanjsnkjreg. I'm sorry if I'm just rambling, but this story is really amazing. Everything is just absolutely wonderful about it, and the song you picked really does fit them well. The objective involvement Near has was really a good choice for telling this story, and you do this style perfectly, even if it was difficult. c:
This is officially one of my favorite stories in the Death Note fandom. 3 Thank you so much for writing it.
| Violent.V chapter 3 . 4/12/2010
Ok..this kinda made me a bit depressed...T.T You just made me sympathize Sayu more than ever now..! That was so sad that Sayu and Mello only manage to spend such a small amount time together..* sob*I love this story! Good job! *sniff sniff*