Reviews for Failing Twilight
moodysavage chapter 14 . 4/26
Reread this again...still a great story. Any thought to posting your story notes?
moodysavage chapter 14 . 1/8
An awesome and solid story. Abandoned. Have you considered posting the 8 pgs. of notes? For closure?
The Good Child chapter 14 . 3/12/2016
Even thou this story is abandoned i still love it.
Facts chapter 5 . 2/8/2016
Exuse me, but Madara died a decade before the Uchiha massacre, and the one posing as him is Obito Uchiha, who was saved by Madara and tried to activate the moons eye plan.
hga chapter 7 . 12/20/2015
I can guess why you abandoned it, but this is not a *bad* story, certainly has fun stuff to keep one's interest.

But I have to protest at the all too common trope of Naruto calling Tsunade "baa-chan" when she hadn't given him a reason to insult her, even know that she's that old, or be as familiar with her as he was with his surrogate grandfather.
Trixi chapter 14 . 11/21/2015
Thank you for writing this story! I love it and i am still rereading it regularly, even if it is abandoned.
Drew86419 chapter 13 . 11/20/2015
You need to stop with the stupid accent. They aren't western people, every single person in the Naruto universe are Asian, and in an entirely Asian land. That guy he was friends with is acceptable with an accent cause you made it seem like he was slurring like a drunk. Nobody else has ever had an accent like a western one in the actual Naruto verse, at least the ORIGINAL Japanese version didn't. I don't know what the dumb American dub has in it and frankly I don't care. It serves 0, you hear that, 0% of a purpose to any part of the story and you even gave a dumb reason as to why he has it. Who starts talking in a different accent than normal when they are angry? Not a singly person alive when it's there native language. So stop being a dumbass and quit using that aggravating accent.
Lulumo chapter 14 . 10/7/2015
Aww, you didn't even make those scene's you promised... like chuuni exam, more Ibiki and Naruto's minions..
Rizuki Dhan chapter 14 . 8/29/2015
It's really good u know so...uhm...continue please?
OrangeStar802 chapter 14 . 5/16/2015
It's really such a shame that this fic's been abandoned. Although a seal master Naruto is kind of a common thing nowadays in some fics, there still something really interesting about how you used it here. There's also the fact that Naruto's personality and how it affects others makes the fic much more likeable. Ibiki's significance in his life was really a cool part as well. As for Team 7, the changes were understandable. It's just Sakura's boast of strength that doesn't sit well with me. And the fact that she's get stronger going after NARUTO'S enemy. Rude. But yea. This is discontinued so I'll just make up my own endings haha. Good read though.
Guest chapter 14 . 5/14/2015
It was a great read!
usaginekohime chapter 2 . 12/21/2014
Boo :( I just read 2 chapters and then realized that this wonderful piece of art has been abandoned for some time... Still, I'm going to continue reading and be sad when there's nothing left :p
sparkreader chapter 14 . 11/6/2014
I'm guessing you've abandoned this story?
greenprisoner chapter 14 . 9/30/2014
please be careful with how you write sakura. you've done well so far but. keep in mind sasuke and naruto have been working non stop for YEARS. the only thing that made sakura "badass" in canon was chakra muscles which naruto is already capable of. her chakra capacity is always going to be smaller, not only because she didn't start until she was 12 and never ate properly but also because genetically she doesn't come from a long family of ninja. for her to "claim" madara as an opponent is BULLSHIT. there's no way she even stands a Chance and that is just so incredibly close minded and selfish of her. Naruto has been working most of his Life to defeat this one guy. not to mention he killed sasuke's family. and sakura getting kidnapped and almost dying by "someone" who she Thinks is madara because of the message to naruto is just ugh i'm so frustrated by sakura but you've done okay so far so i have hope for you
greenprisoner chapter 7 . 9/30/2014
i always thought it was villagers having ninja relatives or sheep mind syndrome rather than outright hatred.
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