Reviews for Absence
Vampire Reader chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Wow! I was thinking this morning what he might have said to Beth in the car. "I'm not supposed to go for rides with strangers." "Your mom asked me to find you and bring you home." "Oh. Okay. You're nicer than that lady." I hope so, Mick thought. Not long enough for a story, but this came while I was thinking about it.
PhoebeTheQueenOfDragons chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I like it, powerful. No wounder it won
scrappyearnhardt chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
:)
moonlightlover60 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Beautiful job. Mick's thoughts on the killing of his wife and how saving little Beth had changed his perspective on his undead life were amazing. You stayed very true to his character that we had come to know from the show. I can see how you won. This was very good, well done.
SciFiRN chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
If only that was all Coraline did...I was never so happy than when her brothers dragged her home.

This was a well written piece, completely in character and I totally loved the last paragraph. Good job!
nightcap chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
And it is well that this story did win. You deserved it.

Loved the last line. Poignant!

And congratulations!
moonjat54 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Excellant. I see why it won. You made me ache for Mick all over again. Coraline did this all wrong. She ruined things for Mick in so many ways. I do so enjoy your writing.