|Reviews for At First|
| ZenBall1878 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
this is sooo good
| Amethystars chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Ha! Love it! Jake/Nessie fics are my new obsession, and this fic was perfect. Short, sweet, some fluff and pretty funny. Thansk for writing it!
| xoPinkSugarox chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
Aw, this was so cute. *squee* I love Jake/Renesmee stories even though I don't really like Jake lol. But this was seriously cute. ] Great job!
| lustofficial chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
that was great!
| EACullensGirl08 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
Aww! Cute! 5 stars! You deserve a MILLION cookies! :)
| nikkiRA chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
“I dunno, Ness, you’re so… European…”
“I live in goddamn Washington.”
LOL, that made me laugh so hard. this was so cute and fluffy and I loved it :)
| Bella's Bff chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
| Angela 93 chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
that was cute! loved it!