Reviews for Fighting the Dark Lords
Bronze chapter 7 . 9/17
Don't know if you're reading this or not but this was a wonderfully fast paced story. I truly enjoyed the whole thing beginning to end. Hope you've got a few others as good.
Bronze chapter 1 . 9/17
Gee, old Dumb-as-a-Door proved he was DUMB AS A DOOR in the end! Always thought his ego was writing checks his body couldn't cash and this proves it. I am sorry about Luna. I like her. I always felt she was more on the ball then anyone realized. Now the only way I can see for bullets not to kill Moldiesnaut would be if he had horcruxes. Other then that how could he hold his body together? Harry did make rounds that exploded for his handgun. It's too bad he didn't tie the spell FiendFyre into at least one of them. That'd give old Moldiewarts a hot reception.
kj2mike chapter 7 . 7/27
I really enjoyed your story. I have a little bit of constructive criticism for you though. Try to slow down the pace of the story a bit by adding some dialogue and extra details. I felt like mentally I was running a marathon while reading. I kept expecting it to slow down a little but it just kept zooming ahead. I really did enjoy your story though. You have a lot of potential as a story teller. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 3 . 3/15
I couldn't make it to the end... Harry is just too much of a MarySue in this fic. I love the plot idea as well, but I feel like I'm reading statements of what happened, not actually reading/living this story. Everything is much to past tense and when present tense is trying to be used its used incorrectly. Thanks for sharing and I hope you continue to work on your writing.
Mari Wollsch chapter 7 . 1/27
super great xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
ak chapter 7 . 12/28/2015
bonne fic!
TOMANAK45 chapter 7 . 1/21/2015
Good story, fast paced, but an enjoyable read nevertheless... i find stories like this to be a refresher from long winded ones, lol... great job...
master1527 chapter 7 . 8/23/2014
good work
Guest chapter 7 . 9/18/2013
that was incredibly sweet at the end... i even had moist eyes and a sappy smile! anyways, thanks for the awesome read!
NightWithMoon chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
a little ridiculous, and what's up with all the incantations when you said that harry stopped using them back in second year?
alwaystoday chapter 7 . 9/13/2012
I enjoyed - R
Anon chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
"Harry also removed his family jewels" - ouch
egwolf65 chapter 7 . 7/19/2012
great story!
god of all chapter 7 . 6/29/2012
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Separ chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
Epic story, tersely told - good read!
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