|Reviews for My Midnight Sun: Saving Bella|
| abbyweyr chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
| LeeseeQ chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
You really did a great job with that. There was so much we didn't get to see from that time in the books. Thanks for writing!
| darkangel chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
The way you wrote it is like a small draft or summary of the real one. i admire your work.
| Debbie in S. Florida chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Wow, what a great job you did on this. It would fit seamlessly into the book, which I mean as a great compliment! You wrote Edward flawlessly, and that's not easy to do. Thanks for writing this-I thoroughly enjoyed it. Now I'm going to check some more of your writing, which, I'm sure, will be just as fabulous.
| StrangeMindFiction chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
This was incredibly good! It felt as if this should be the real one... and I think it should! :D I loved it, and I really loved how true you stayed to Edward's character! It was just perfect!
| Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
What heart wrenching thoughts coming from Edward. I love how you tell the saving of Bella through Edward's eyes. He does seem to be cursed.
| Clair de Lune.cdc chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
| car57c chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
I want you to know I love your stories! I've read lots of twilight fan fic but I've enjoyed yours so very much. I love the detail you put into your writing. Thanks so much for writing.
| aThiNa chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
| kareinabambina chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
edward saying "How dare Bella do this to me?" in reference to her trying to save her mother
alice saying "a girl you've never snogged."
neither of them would say something like this. edward is the epitome of selflessness, and alice is not crass.
regardless of a few character misteps, i think your version is very good and interesting.
| elannas chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
oh my gosh, what an awesome way to end this! It is SO in Stephenie Meyer's style. It's amazing how well you capture that.
It's such a relief that he doesn't leave after twilight. I wonder if Bella had any idea how close he came to leaving her then. Especially looking back (while she was still human) and thinking about their relationship.
| bookish327 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Wow. This is so well-written, and the characterization is excellent. I loved the humorous dialogue you wrote for Alice. Your Edward was very canon-correct. This fic is just excellent in every way. Fantastic job.
| Patrice chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
wow, that was amazing. I found myself feeling like i was actually there with Edward as he waited for Bella to wake up. And you totally got Alice. That was great!
| ebhg chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Another wonderful glimpse into Edward's character:)
"Like the lovesick teenager you are."
I love that. Too many people overly-humanize Edward; they complain that he's possessive and controlling and abusive. He may be those things, but only because of his vampiric nature. You've done an excellent job here balancing the two. Edward's struggle to stop drinking, and Carlisle's thoughts on the feasibility of Edward's and Bella's relationship were spot on. And the beginnings of his determination to leave her human, and remove his presence from her life were very well done.
| Dawn chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Really great chapter - you followed canon nicely, and with enough angst on Edward's part. Loved the ending countdown until Bella regains consciousness.
Thanks for sharing!