Reviews for Of Bathrooms And Fried Chicken Freddy's story
Sennethe chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
A triumph of spare but vivid details and economy of description. You make the reader think for him- or herself instead of outlining every last little clothing item and facial expression.


-blinks again-

Unfortunately, you just about lost me.

I need more practice thinking.
sylphxpression chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Not really enough detail. Kinda confusing, but then I'm used to being in that state...
Quillerella chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Those poor chickens! I can't believe Sarah needed a luxury bathroom. Jareth has six bedrooms? Wow. If you haven't guessed already, I loved this story. It is quirky in precisely the right way, and its quirkiness appealed to me greatly! Keep up the great work! :D
damsel-in-stress chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Mwahahaha... weird and funny! I love it!
notwritten chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Very interesting story. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice weekend. Keep smiling. :-)
Kore-of-Myth chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
She just wanted to use the bathroom? Priceless!

I could SO see that happening - very realistic actually. I like the Goblin suicide at the end. Poor Sarah...I should have known that Freddy would kill her though.

And if Sarah wants to slide her hands around his throat, it's because she wants to strangle him, not kiss him right?

I do wonder why Jareth has six bedrooms...that many unwanted guests?

Keep Writing!