This got rec'd over on ADF and I'm certainly glad I started reading.

You've hooked me from chapter one and I'm looking forward to finding out more about Edward and Bella.

Off to read chapter 2!

I know u alrady finished writing this but I like the word "shaft". thats always fun lol

that was good i liked it cant waot to see what other stories you have

Very nice and loved the ending..very pretty!

"Wanna make out?”

“Nope.”

“’Kay. Night, Bella,”

“Night, Edward.”

Ahahahaha I laughed SO hard! Great chapter:D

the beginning was a little dull and it didn't really hold my attention much. but the ending was really good so i'll continue reading

Ha! Loved the end...it just seemed so this Edward! I think fighting is good...as long as you make up afterwards!

This was a sweet story. Enjoyed how well written it was and your characters seemed so real. Thank you for writing.

It was a fabulous lemon! What made it special was Edward and Bella's love shining through the whole scene. Loved Bella's epiphany at the pool and Edward welcoming her to the club. So sweet! Yay! They finally have found that balance. So have enjoyed the way you told this Bella and Edward's story. Thank you for writing.

I love how Edward won't let Bella sit and fester. Edward also defends their relationship and their love. I knew Bella would go right to the 'all is doomed' attitude. Kudos for Edward for telling her he refused to believe they would end up like Charlie and Renee. So he made her go skiing. I think Bella is finally starting to believe in Edward's love.

Ah so Charlie and Renee's problems finally hit the fan. Even though Bella knows that they have been having problems she's been ignoring it...now it's in her face. Poor Bella. Another slap at love not making things better. Sigh...

Sigh...didn't like your last line. It will take time for Bella to feel secure with Edward the Lover. I liked how Edward said, when they were just being friends they were fine, but as soon as the element of romance entered the picture then so did the awkwardness. I like how you are writing the way these two feel about each other. I think you portray their relationship nicely. Enjoying.

I love the progression of their relationship. They got things out in the open...Bella yelled at Edward and told him exactly what she thought. Yes they are both afraid on a number of levels, but they know they are scared and it's out in the open. They just need to keep talking. It always seems that Bella and Edward do things backwards...so it's good that Edward is going to date Bella. It's probably also a good thing she's having her period! LOL!

I do like your Carlisle, he is a good father to Edward. He understands what Edward is going through and he doesn't judge he observes and comments and let's Edward decide.

So Edward and Bella have this deep connection which they have felt since childhood. Now emerging into adulthood they see it shift from platonic to romantic and are afraid of how it will effect them. Love is scary.

It's so tough enough being a teenager, and then you mix in insecurites, and fear...it's damn painful. I am enjoying how you are writing the dynamics between Bella and Edward. Does Bella fear letting Edward know her true feelings because she hasn't seen true love? Her parents obviously don't show that to her. Ofcourse we all have insecurities...Bella needs to somehow realize that Edward loves her wholly...he's been her friend for years and he's seen it all and hasn't run. Can they find balance? Enjoying!

Ew...Tanya. It's too bad that his first experience sucked, so he felt inadequate. No wonder he has so much guilt about Bella and the way he handled her first time.