|Reviews for Mourning|
| Obelisk of Light chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
This is beautiful and very moving. By the time I reached the ending, I nearly wanted to cry. Especially at this line:
“Well, it only took my death to bring that out of you, didn’t it?”
| 90MLLu chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Beautiful and sad! It really is and I love this one-shot. It sounds very sincere and I like the way you have described Tsunade's feelings towards Jiraiya. In my opinion the last part was the best! I'm not saying that the other parts were bad. On the contrary they were amazing as well but I like that last part the best because of their "conversation". It moved me very deeply. You made me feel sympathy for Tsunade. This is just super great. Fantastic job!(v)
| AubergineStorm chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I loved it. Something's wrong with me. I'm not supposed to like angst! But it was awesome.
| Kate chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
That was really good. I love drama fics. There needs to be more. Haha. Great job
| lovesrainscent chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
Oh, so sad.
| anon chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
oh wow! i loved your story it was well put and you should definatly write some more D
| xtintin chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
this is so sad! [
I cried when I read the chapter when Tsunade was remembering Jiraiya and cried and I cried reading this too!