shittinf and sobbing ill hug you starscream

Poor starscream

This story was awesome, I loved it :D

I wonder if Starscream was an unreliable narrator, though. The characters are so proud they'd never admit their true feelings, and starscream himself spends half the story trying to convince himself that he doesn't care. So I'm not entirely sure if Starscream's interpretation of Megatron's motives (that Megatron doesn't care for SS at all) is real, or if Megatron was also pretending not to care out of pride. I'd love to read a version of this fic from Megatron's pov.

Anyway, great story :)

It's fine, I didn't need my heart anyway.

I am shamed to admit that this might be the twelfth time I've read through this little one-shot and every time I read the final paragraphs I always find myself keening for more without fail. I almost want to see a follow up of Megatron, at best, reciprocating Star's feelings or, at least, recognizing that there's at least a little worth in keeping his second around. Alas, I'm sure it's too late to be begging for more now, but a girl has to dream, yes? Thank you for such an amazing, insightful story, dear.

AWESOME! :)

I reaaaally loved this. It was very well written and in-character; definitely one of the best fics in this fandom! 3

I particularly loved the subtlety of whatever relationship the characters were supposed to have - it can be interpreted however the reader wants and I think that's far more appealing ;)

Really nice job!

I really, really liked this little story-glimpse. Thank you. I liked the way you explored the dynamic between SS and Megs. I agree about the SS just wanting a dad idea. I also liked how you left everything understated.

No real crits. This was a good read. Faved.

aww...poor screamer...:(

Nyar. I'm glad you manage to get past the false dichotomy (nearly) everyone fall into for Starscream's character. (I.e. Yes, he IS an ego-maniacal jerk, but that doesn't preclude him from wanting some emotional security... And neither does having actual feelings stop him from being a 'baddy'.)

Thanks for the reply to my message. I'm sad to see the story go, (cause I really was enjoying it) but I can see where you're coming from. (I can't finish a story for the life of me, largely because of lack of planning.)

Perfect writing, thank you very much for this excellent story...

Absolutely beautiful, I'm wordless!

*Military salutes*

Megatron snorted. “And you think I should just take your word for it.”

“Why wouldn’t you?”

“Is that a joke, lieutenant?”

“… I suppose it must be.”

I don't know why, but this little exchange was the saddest part about the whole thing. For me, anyways, because Megatron doesn't have faith in Starscream and he is just CRUSHED. I mean, AWW! Poor Starscream!

Oh, that one was very touching, I think Megatron cares somewhat, and the war Prime was talking about was the one between Screamer and Megs, wasn't it? I think it's just Screamer that didn't catch the point...

Oh, this is so sad. D: *cuddles Screamer; gets bricked* x ;

Wonderful, wonderful prose. You do great with the emotional quality.

Ohh! That was really sad but so cute! I loved it!