Reviews for Another Daydream in Another Night
azab chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
i loved it
angelic lily chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
My goodness you write lovely RabixKanda~ I can't decide which one is my favorite since all of them are so much LOVE
this be a dead account chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Awh. This is really sweet. D: Poor Kanda-chan! " I wanna comfort him. And the thing with scars is really scary... Excellent fic. :]
Winterblazewolf chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
I like this story. It's sad that Lavi can't be with Yuu forever ah but still... D
NaussicaVOW chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Your right,it is pretty realistic.. but I still liked it D

Tossino chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
As usual... Very poetic and just love~ *-* It was just trickled with Kanda, and trickled with Lavi. All of it was just so... so... them!

*Tips a whole truck of praise over you*

You'll be getting a lot of praise from me, that's just the beginning. *Grin*
melric chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
decrease in love? no no no no - more realistic, more canon - yes.

I just love how you write, the sadness is there, the necessary hinted fluff is there, and the two of them as always in canon.

I dont know why this pair isnt as popular as KA... to me they seem more likely to happen, more natural than the cliche opposites, and im sure you share my point of view when i say both characters are so amazing a greater fandom should be there; but it isnt - dont let that stop you writting.

your works are amazing (hoshino should hire you! lol) so as always ill be expecting the next story impaciently
Sarahfreak chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Wow, I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to get back on the review bandwagon...I hope to heck that the love level has not decreased cause I love reading RK (either by your gracious self or other awesome writers) and I can confidently say that I jump on any fic you submit and love it to bits *grin*...*cough* Moving onto the fic...

I loved it! Just something about the way you described Kanda's demons driving him to find 'comfort' (well his version of it anyway) in someone he claims annoys him to no end, was just magic. I could see the entire scene playing out in my head and it was just pure gold (the whole bit with Kanda stealing Lavi's bed *dies*). The thing I probably liked most about this fic was how Lavi offered as much support as he could without deviating from his duty as a Bookman, the layer of reality you added was just the icing on the cake. Love the last line as well...Awesome writing (don't you dare stop with the Lavi/Kanda awesomeness!). Loved it!
chibi.hazel-chan chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Wow...the last line from Lavi really struck me cause in life we cannot have everything we want and that's the way it is. Sad but true. The way you placed this fact of life into a piece of fiction is truly marvelous. Great job as always! D
silverfire113 chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Very nicely done you have an awesome style of writing. Keep up the good work I loved it :)
Halane chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Decreasing in the levels of love? (as you won't be able to see it, the question mark was there about fifteen times xD)

HOW MUCH LOVE DO YOU WANT? OMG TOT This was... this was... so fucking cute TOT (completely amazed)

Wah, and here I was thinking you couldn't do better than in Caught up and this little thing appears TOT I'm crying and I don't even know if it's for Yuu or for Rabi xD So sad XD

But really, risking yourself as Rabi does by just... staying at Yuu's side, and relying on someone to take care of you as Kanda does... I think that's really love, even if it is not a romantic relationship )

Wah, I'm writing a not-like-me-at-all review O-O It's because I'm so excited ToT I really like this one! It was cute cute cute cute and realistic, as you said. I'm glad that someone thinks that being a bookman is the most important thing for Rabi, because ppl keep saying that I'm crazy for thinking that way XD


“You really need to learn how to take care of yourself, Yuu.” He gave a smile, his lips curving into just the right shape before he settled to watch the Japanese, finally resting at peace for tonight. “I can’t be here for you forever.”

I loved that line XD It was cute (and I kep saying cute xD)

“I will do it tomorrow, Yuu.” The grin shriveled into a faint smile the moment his green eye caught the fluttering of long black lashes. “Sleep for now.”

It sounded as "yeah, yeah, whatever, just shut up, you little cute thing" XD

And Rabi came to the conclusion that they were in Yuu’s room late at night, when the sun doesn’t shine and all there was were darkness stretching on and on. They, as in Yuu’s memories, regrets, fears, and all those negative emotions he has bottled on inside.

Perfect TOT

And let me say you did perfect when writing Yuu in the begining, the whole Yuu-thing had an instinctive tone that really fit him ;)

Yukiko Tsukishirou chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
And another beautiful RK fiction from our dearly beloved Kuro-san! This was sweet and yes, a little sad. Very realistic and believable, like you said. Nothing too angsty, nothing too fluffly either. I loved it like always. You always put me in this special little mood where I'm literally breathless for a moment and can only stare blankly in awe as I ponder your words. And then I go ahead and read it again. Much love~

Also, in light of the "lack of RK love" note you put in here, I have a SUPER-ULTRA-MEGA-SECRET-PROJECT going on right now... namely, AN AU RK FICTION. IT SHALL BE EPIC. Uh, yeah. Watch me fail. I'll post like, one chapter (which I'm not done with, by the way) and then end up not being able to post again for like, 3 months. . So, there will be a SUPER-ULTRA-MEGA-NOT-SO-SECRET-SECRET-PROJECT coming up soon~

... Hopefully.

It's the biggest plot bunneh I've had since never. XD

Love ya very much, Kuro-san~ Thank you for writing!

Julye chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Hello there! I'm glad that you've posted it. Im kinda busy so I only have a lil' free time this late (1am).

Not a long review for a long story and hard work, sorry! But I read it, enjoy it, and love it! Welcome back to this style, love it the most!

"I cant hug my Yuu to sleep tonite" Aww how cute *melts*. So sweet!

The last sentence..was sad, indeed...but at least he did care bout Yuu a lot. Great, though!

And the lack of RK... *headdesk*