Reviews for In the Fade
gaspily chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
that was so great!
mikachery chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
very good story, I loved it!
Atlaxxxx chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
It may have been long, but it was good. I love how you kind of built up to the whole sex scene thing. Instead of 'they meet, and he ravages her'. I have seen that before and it was kinda retarted. It's like wanna-be-love-at-first-sight. Yours was different. It was a great story. I'm gonna look up that pther story of yours and then comment on that when I get the chance. Keep the talent goin!

~TwilightBorn~
sophie42 chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Wonderful! Very cute, and hot :)
vixen1836 chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
That was simply diving. Excellent pace, great characterization. Naughty teachers should always be respectful first. I really enjoyed it. This was perhaps one of the best oneshots for the contest. Please give mine a read if you get a chance. We have very similar taste. Dignified and Refined. A :)
pencildrawings chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
great story. once the contest is over or something, you should really continue this and make it a series of its own. id be cool to see their life in new york city after this n stuff :] i hope you do! thatd be really cool. great story.
Elizabeth93 chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
that was cute...well, as cute as a lemon get. awesome to see that there was more to them after that. good choice on the EPOV.
ignorethiscompletely chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
omg this was so good! it was sweet but HOT! i loved how you built up their relationship rather than just doing the "ms. swan come after class for detention" quickie, it was very well done
pandz0rz chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Heck yes!

Where do I sign up?

Great job :)
olivia chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
wicked awsome, it was like twilight exept a little different you know? instead of edward being a vampire he was a teacher, a still out of bounds guy, knowing that being with bella was wrong, and bella ofcourse was the same. i love how despite the story change you kept their types of character basically the same. great writing and a lovelt plot. good job! )

olivia
my bleeding tears of agony chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
this was more fluffy than lemony but it was nice
Prizz-sweetie chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
That was so cute!
GraceMac chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
ah! CUTE!
freakyhazeleyes chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
i really like this one! good job!
justbri chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Lord... That was awesome! And, so much more than a one-shot! I wish we could get a full story out of this... (hint, hint)
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