|Reviews for In the Fade|
| ericastwilight chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I loved it. I like that you developed a relationship before the lemon.
| Raven Alice chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
believe or not, ihave read longer, i love how the realtionship progressed, and it wasnt just "hi i'm bella" "hi I'm edward" "lets have sex" there was a real plot to this and real emotions and just the right amout of steam. Love it, and even if you dont win, your the best in my book.
| u2ugly2nv chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I actually liked it.. it was like one long novel with the perfect end results.
| kuntrygal chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Loved it! And I love your other story Simple Twist Of Fate!
| Josie chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Absolutely wonderful (and extremely hott) story!
The plot was great, and it was a quick read, despite its length. Hope to see others like it soon!
| iamawickedchild chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
You just covered a whole year in one shot? wow! thats something! :D
LOVED IT! so sweet! and sexy, besides the whole background story is just great!
i would love to read a whole story!
| barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
i really love this one shot ,and i am reading a simple fate
| Rei Magami chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Very good! ) Really liked it! It was hot! )
| NatTheHippieChild chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
it was long and i loved it
| littlecrickit chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
WOW! this was really good! once the contest is over, you should make this into a real story!
| Jayeliwood chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
extremely sweet and sexy
| stavanger1 chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
ok, so i totally had to say something, when you mentioned the Faroe Islands it totally made my day. My grandmother is from there and I still have family there and it just made me so happy to read about it even if it was only in passing. so thanks for making my day!