Reviews for Delivery
foxy209 chapter 1 . 1/26
So so so so *so* cute! I love it... I miss Tiva...

-foxy209 (too lazy to log on)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
please. continue. make it...not a one-shot lol.
Jesusrocks chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Aw! So cute! Are you going to update anytime soon?
pia chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
as if he didn't know! the question is what is he going to do about it?

please update.
God'srider chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Adorable adn he likes her back!
SemperFiNeverForget051909 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
"You so like me." ahahhahaahah. That is so DiNozzo.
sara-anne-roe chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Great, as usual. :)

Spring Dancer x.
EdwardslambLaci chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
i liked it that was sweet
mmjasamjaudia4eva chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
ah hope you update soon
Monotufu chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
so cut so cute SO CUTE! OMG you need to write a contiuation, that would be AWESOME!
Not stalker chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
"You so like me" LOL i can imagine you saying that

good fic even if you think its fluff

what the hell am i doing here at 7:00am?

God it was hot last night i dont know what it was like at your house but it was bad here and its gonna be worse today...

that cheesecake still looks really nice...

"Doesn't he know that I've had him memorized for so long"
Turbo Grom chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
What a song!
coffee4106 chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
hehe, reading.. she lies good
Olli chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
He stands there then walks away

My god if I could only say

I’m holding every breathe for you...

He’d never tell you but he can play guitar

I think he can see through everything

But my heart

First thought when I wake up is

My god he’s beautiful

So I put on my make up

And pray for a miracle...

I almost fell off my chair when i read those lyrics. i love the song "I'd Lie"

Cute chapter
madison chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
I liked it alot and I think u should write more to it
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