Reviews for Multiples
YesIReadTwilightFF chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Oh, I so very much want this to continue :)

And even if it was just basically porn, it was good porn, as you said. Maybe thats why I want it to continue..

After finals, I'll be checking out more of your work, hurray!

OH! I did just check out your profile, and there is a sequal. Damn. It's going to be heard to resist reading it instead of all the boring study material I have.
Britpacksuccubus chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Oh Gawd, that was fucking HOT...I NEED MORE!
Evolutions Vampire chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
i dont know if this is sopposed to be a one shot but i think u should contiue it
NZTwilighter chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Thoroughly enjoyed! ;)

I like it when Bella has balls and/or confidence, I also like it wasn't quite the standard Bella/Edward lemon. and I'm glad I didn't have to read how Bella has been in love with him since she was 16, lol.

God I love Edward!
starfish422 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
M. That was hot. And it's really sweet to imagine that they will end up together. xoxo
Gray223 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
i think u shoould add a couple more chapters or so b/c i feel like it should b continued...

p.s.

dat was fuckin H.O.T.
tehrager chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
i feel so dirty. haha. but yea, fucking brilliant, it is.
Tammy7512 chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Loved this story ... so hot! Can't wait to read sequel!
TwilightBEL chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
This was really excellent. i would beg you to continue it but I see that you already have. I can't wait to see wher you take this Edward and Bella. :o)

Keep Writing!
twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
LOVED THIS ONESHOT. LOVED THE BELLA AND EDWARD. THIS WAS REALLY HOTT. AWESOME JOB. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
oh.serendipity chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
HOLY God. This is incredible.

There really is a lack of toy play in Twilight smut. I applaud you for the toys! HUZZAH! So hot.
hottygurl7 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Very... Very good!
DyingInMyDreams chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
amazing
PowerofX chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
What happened to the other chapter(s) of this story? I remember a tub scene and a certain kind of "ring" scene. And there was more wonderful lemons.
omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Aw. FREAKING HOT lemon and a bit of fluff too. My favorite kind of story!
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