Reviews for Multiples
6jenn6 chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I totally and completely love this story!

You should continue it.
grandsophia chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
i want edward as a shag buddy ! no fair !
wildcatazz chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Mind blowing and sweet!
ssherrill115 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
That was really good!
jkp13452 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
that was very sexual

i think it could be better, but i like it alot!

keep writing!
warispeace chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Really good! ;)
thedrchefmacweeto chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
wo wo and woho that was hot please write more quickly
Tiaaby chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
WOW! I don't even have words for this! SO hot! I'm off to read the other part!
henrylover94 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
please tell there is a sequel
YesIReadTwilightFF chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Oh, I so very much want this to continue :)

And even if it was just basically porn, it was good porn, as you said. Maybe thats why I want it to continue..

After finals, I'll be checking out more of your work, hurray!

OH! I did just check out your profile, and there is a sequal. Damn. It's going to be heard to resist reading it instead of all the boring study material I have.
Britpacksuccubus chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Oh Gawd, that was fucking HOT...I NEED MORE!
Evolutions Vampire chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
i dont know if this is sopposed to be a one shot but i think u should contiue it
NZTwilighter chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Thoroughly enjoyed! ;)

I like it when Bella has balls and/or confidence, I also like it wasn't quite the standard Bella/Edward lemon. and I'm glad I didn't have to read how Bella has been in love with him since she was 16, lol.

God I love Edward!
starfish422 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
M. That was hot. And it's really sweet to imagine that they will end up together. xoxo
Gray223 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
i think u shoould add a couple more chapters or so b/c i feel like it should b continued...


dat was fuckin H.O.T.
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