|Reviews for Multiples|
| jkp13452 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
that was very sexual
i think it could be better, but i like it alot!
| bia9193 chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Really good! ;)
| thedrchefmacweeto chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
wo wo and woho that was hot please write more quickly
| Tiaaby chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
WOW! I don't even have words for this! SO hot! I'm off to read the other part!
| henrylover94 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
please tell there is a sequel
| YesIReadTwilightFF chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Oh, I so very much want this to continue :)
And even if it was just basically porn, it was good porn, as you said. Maybe thats why I want it to continue..
After finals, I'll be checking out more of your work, hurray!
OH! I did just check out your profile, and there is a sequal. Damn. It's going to be heard to resist reading it instead of all the boring study material I have.
| Britpacksuccubus chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Oh Gawd, that was fucking HOT...I NEED MORE!
| Evolutions Vampire chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
i dont know if this is sopposed to be a one shot but i think u should contiue it
| NZTwilighter chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Thoroughly enjoyed! ;)
I like it when Bella has balls and/or confidence, I also like it wasn't quite the standard Bella/Edward lemon. and I'm glad I didn't have to read how Bella has been in love with him since she was 16, lol.
God I love Edward!
| starfish422 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
M. That was hot. And it's really sweet to imagine that they will end up together. xoxo
| Gray223 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
i think u shoould add a couple more chapters or so b/c i feel like it should b continued...
dat was fuckin H.O.T.
| tehrager chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
i feel so dirty. haha. but yea, fucking brilliant, it is.
| Tammy7512 chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Loved this story ... so hot! Can't wait to read sequel!
| TwilightBEL chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
This was really excellent. i would beg you to continue it but I see that you already have. I can't wait to see wher you take this Edward and Bella. :o)
| twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
LOVED THIS ONESHOT. LOVED THE BELLA AND EDWARD. THIS WAS REALLY HOTT. AWESOME JOB. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!