Reviews for Multiples
emillythestrange chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
wow. that was hot! i really liked it! no, screw that, i LOVED It! I Really really really realyl realyl hope you write more lemons! i'm sure you'll win!
Megmae chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
AMAZING. Holy hell that was hot. p I would consider this one of the best for in the contest. Thank you, for such an amazing one shot.
xpersephone chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
That was amazingly Hot..just the thought of Edward and anal sex..thank you...thank you
lulabelljane chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Uh, damn! That was insanely hot! Like...WOW! And I agree...I so want to see their date!
Katherine Rosalie Hale chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Dear God! Where can I get that Edward? LOL!
Bluesberryangel chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Best lemon ever! You should keep going, make it into a full story line. It would be great!
mllesinistre chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Sweet Jesus woman, that was insane. You have got one hell of an imagination. That was really hot and I agree with the others that this should be a longer story.

Fabulous job!
Skepo chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
I'm dieing to see whta will happen on
Starshinedown chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Holy hell. This is more than a lemon, this is a lemon marathon!

My jaw dropped early on, and I never picked it back up. Wow.
magically-strange chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
this is 2 goo one-shot!
hsmroxsmysockz chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
this is like the best one-shot ever! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story so much! you are a great writer!keep up the good work
xxxemma chapter 1 . 9/13/2008


That was like, the best lemon I've ever read!

You're such an amazing writer, I really liked the length, too. Thank you for that. :D

cmw24 chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Phew! That was some HOT HOT HOT sexin. I loved it. I wanted the rest of the night too though. I think you should turn this into a story. It would be awesome. There is so much more you could do with it.
snowror chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Definitely my favourite!
Oo Livia Cullen oO chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
WOW ! That was HOT ! So, so, so HOT ! So steamy I had to change my panties ! I really loved how you made Bella a very liberated woman, it's a nice change from others stories where she's the blushing virgin (although, it's kinda hot when well done). I wouldn't have minded reading the detailed version of the arse sex You should turn this into a story, it's really good and the dynamics between the characters are really interesting and very well written ! I am voting for this story in the contest !
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