Reviews for Multiples
Katherine Rosalie Hale chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Dear God! Where can I get that Edward? LOL!
Bluesberryangel chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Best lemon ever! You should keep going, make it into a full story line. It would be great!
mllesinistre chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Sweet Jesus woman, that was insane. You have got one hell of an imagination. That was really hot and I agree with the others that this should be a longer story.

Fabulous job!
Skepo chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
I'm dieing to see whta will happen on
Starshinedown chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Holy hell. This is more than a lemon, this is a lemon marathon!

My jaw dropped early on, and I never picked it back up. Wow.
cullenitis chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
this is 2 goo one-shot!
hsmroxsmysockz chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
this is like the best one-shot ever! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story so much! you are a great writer!keep up the good work
xxxemma chapter 1 . 9/13/2008


That was like, the best lemon I've ever read!

You're such an amazing writer, I really liked the length, too. Thank you for that. :D

cmw24 chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Phew! That was some HOT HOT HOT sexin. I loved it. I wanted the rest of the night too though. I think you should turn this into a story. It would be awesome. There is so much more you could do with it.
snowror chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Definitely my favourite!
Oo Livia Cullen oO chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
WOW ! That was HOT ! So, so, so HOT ! So steamy I had to change my panties ! I really loved how you made Bella a very liberated woman, it's a nice change from others stories where she's the blushing virgin (although, it's kinda hot when well done). I wouldn't have minded reading the detailed version of the arse sex You should turn this into a story, it's really good and the dynamics between the characters are really interesting and very well written ! I am voting for this story in the contest !
knblas chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Wow! That was hot! Well done! You've definitely got my vote.
void-unused-delete-it chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
dang this would be a really good story! and i wanted to hear about the rest of the time dang...
Smelted chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Wow! Awesome, hot entry.

You should make this into a longer story! It has a ton of potential.
iamawickedchild chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
WOW! that was extremly hot! in fact, it was one of the hottest and most detailed i read so far! :D AMAZING!

and of course they have to end up together! love the ending!
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