|Reviews for Bury It Forward|
| Codydog chapter 35 . 3/8
Thank you for a wonderful story so far. You have written by far the most deliciously psychotic Envy that I have read so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next. So, sorry, but here is an attack from sharp-fanged plot bunnies in chains and leather to hopefully help you with your next chapter :)
| Sparky chapter 35 . 3/7
Omg I finally caught up, what am I going to do? You're chapters are so long and I love every single word. It's rare that a story can keep my attention throughout the whole thing an that's what this story does. Seriously! I hope Ed gets better, I really do. Do you think it will happen? Soon? Later? I expect that envy will make a move before that happens but still, could it? Hmmm.
| davekatshideout chapter 1 . 2/28
I really really love this story...all of it. So amazing.
| Words-go-here chapter 35 . 1/25
I've been dreading writing this review.
There are two reasons: One being that if I am writing a review, that means I have reached the end of the updates. THE END I TELL YOU. You've crafted a beautifully long fic, with chapters that span on for glorious miles. But I've stayed up till two in the morning pushing myself through this, and even with that it's been a wonderful week reading through this. I cannot wait until the next update. Also I commend you for having this fic going since 2008! God, in internet time, that is eternity! The second reason I've been dreading this review: I have to tell you so many things and that requires effort. But you must know the glories your story has given me! You make all of this seem real, all of the science and phycology is authentic. It is to me anyway, I don't know whether or not it actually is real... but it sure sounds plausible! And you put so many problems in front of our poor Ed and Al. It's like life, problems won't stop coming just because the author wants to wrap it up. Your descriptions of Ed's struggles are worded perfectly, and I never had to think about what was trying to be portrayed. And while this story has been going for a whopping span of years, I've not seen a single dropped detail. The OC's you've put in are great too, unlike many other OC's that are annoying, yours fit into the story. I'm talking about Gansworth here, to clarify.
So sorry to unload all these words on you, but you've gifted me with 386,327 of them, so I think I owe you at least this many in return.
I wait eagerly!
| BlueIsTheColourOfOurPlanet chapter 1 . 1/20
Can't wait for another chapter, this is really awesome and cool. I hope Envy will be torched some day, but that's up to you, I really look forward to whatever you write here next, I'm sure it will be amazing
| The Waiting Ninja chapter 35 . 1/9
This has been an amazing story to read. I can't wait to see where it leads and how the rest of the plot of the series will play out within your own plot. Especially with the impending meet between Havoc and Solarios with Mustang intending to crash the party whenever that happens. Then there is Ed's plotting to save everyone despite still not being at all recovered himself. Wonder how he'll react to the surgery and how much will it affect his plans!
Once again, wonderful job. Can't wait for an update.
| Sparky chapter 34 . 12/17/2013
It has taken me do long to get here, but I am almost caught up to you! This is exciting, I feel like something big is coming, Envy is getting restless and Mustang is somewhat starting to piece the clues together. Alphonse and Edward both don't think they have a problem, which is not good but it means they will probably try and do something. Maybe they'll make a break for it...hmmm. Poor Ed, he didn't do too well with the hypnotism. But he did better than I expected! I gotta ask, are you in training to be a psychologist or are you one already or something? Everything seems really accurate, or at least as far as I can tell with my limited only-one-semester-of-psychology knowledge has brought me.
I adore your style of writing, I think the flow is really nice. You're able to hold our attention and keep us on our toes with what will happen next! I do hope we get to see more soon! As it is, I still have another chapter to read! Yay me!
| Sparky chapter 33 . 11/20/2013
So I've pretty much failed in the review department, but let me tell you how much I love you. This story, with all it's angst and ups and downs and twists and turns, has had me on my toes for months now. The chapters are so gloriously long, and keep me engaged throughout. (even if I have to take a break every once in a while for emotional reasons(so much angst!) I'm still engaged)
I really want to know what's going to happen next! And I'm almost caught up to where the most recent chapters are! I'm so excited because Ed thinks he's getting better, and he is, but not enough for what he needs to do! And the gate scene was interesting! I was wondering about that, an the alchemy thing is interesting! Wow it's getting so cool
| Ayie chapter 33 . 11/3/2013
That's just incredible. You know, I don't even remember how many times I read your story, and still I discover every time new things about a character, a situation, etc... Sometimes I focus on a particular thing, and every time I'm happy to find out a real evolution, step by step, for each character and all. Really, you're fantastic! I can't even blame you for those long months you put me through waiting for a new chapter, because it must be so hard to create something like that!
I just wish that no matter how long it takes, you will complete this story. Thaaaaank you so much! :)
| Elvenlaughter chapter 35 . 10/14/2013
I had to reread everything to catch up to this point. Took me several days. I don't regret a single second. :-) Wow, at the beginning I just felt disgusted by Rage, but now I'm starting to pity him and even feel compassion. It's that human side coming through.
And I think Dr. Gansworth is right about cutting back on Havoc's and Armstrong's time with the two boys, whether they like it or not.
You continue to astonish with your excellent story and detail, and your characterization. I love this story, and I am so glad you're still working on it! Just... please don't take quite so long to update next time, okay? :-)
| MadManWithATimeTravellingBox chapter 29 . 10/12/2013
You... this is my new favorite story. welcome to my favorites. also, spelling errors, which would usually make me ragequit the story, i don't even care. thats how good it is.
Also, spelling errors. Everywhere.
| MadManWithATimeTravellingBox chapter 13 . 10/12/2013
I feel like this is going to turn into an ArmstrongxEd lemon.
I don't want that. no one does. no one.
| THE GU3ST chapter 35 . 10/3/2013
YES! NEW MATERIAL, THANK YOU! GL in the future Mister/Miss!
| Lime Gap chapter 35 . 9/27/2013
Hello! What does Rage look like? Is he just a gross blob of flesh? Or something humanoid? Next chapter, please describe!
| Guest chapter 35 . 9/24/2013
The day my little alert comes into my inbox I eagerly set upon your newest chapter with careful relish. I just have to read it in little bites so I can fully savor it.
But you truly have a great story coming along here. And I eagerly await the next installment.