Reviews for Broken
JDLuvaSQEE chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I LOVE THIS! More please!
SeverinadeStrango chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I've always felt so bad for the Commodore...

Awwww...

In my opinion he needs a shoulder to cry on :(

- Severina
Mallie chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Ah, sweet Willington!

Really there should be more Will/James stories in the world (sigh).

Of course I'm still mad that Elizabeth broke BOTH their hearts, but they'll be better for each other than she would have been anyway.

Actually I rather like Elizabeth in the films (especially the first one) but I really like Will/James stories (and occasionally James/Jack).
ValykirieRevolution chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
ah a little Will/Norrie huh? Kinda cute. I always liked these two, its a shame we didn't get the two of them together much.
FriendLey chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
This is a good story. But I just hate the fact that SHE ran away with HIM! This story is a SPARRABETH! I hate Sparrabeth! No offense... Since your story is a Sparrabeth, then you must be a Sparrabeth. But you sorta made the story James/Will and nevermind. James/Will is too ugly to think about. Again. No offense. But great story thought. LONG LIVE WILLABETH!