Reviews for Forever Silenced
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2016
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Very sad, but I like
The Storyteller of Old chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
That must of been some history lesson. Lol.
like smoke in my lungs chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Ha, rated K? P
kelsey chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
why did he hurt bella?
mrs0cullen chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
aw that is so sad. did bella die too? is that why he committed suicide
WereWolf1010 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
This was such a perferct one shot. Even if it was terribly sad, the whole idea and plot was fantastic ... Even the ending. I just wish that it could have been even longueur. Who knows, maybe you can add more in the futur? :D
katyaaranel chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
It's good and intense but lacks some further description, as it was already said :) Still I liked it.
0041523 chapter 1 . 3/6/2009


That's a good wow.

For something so short, it was very well written.

Edward how could you?


You should do a backstory to what lead up to this,

Unless you already did...

I'll check!

-Psychotic Mess
Mrs.DarcyCullen chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
wow..this is really dark LOL..very OOC of eddie.. I am afraid for your history teacher if you feel this way in his/her class..but then again i guess history class does often cause students to turn suicidal/homicidal
Ninja Fox of the Fire chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
The details given were good and it was kind of suspenseful in a good way, but maybe it would help to perhaps go back and explain why Edward was mad at her because I find it hard to believe that he would hurt Bella like that in an argument. For instance, what were they fighting about? What you have is good, but I think you might need to add more or detail more next time. Just trying to help.

-Ninja Fox of the Fire