Reviews for For Her Protection
Mondschein Psychi chapter 1 . 3/14/2016
Thank you for just breaking my heart into pieces. And then putting it back together. And then breaking it again. But, that apart, a beautiful story. Keep writing. Honestly.
needsimprovement chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
work on your grammar and your characterization!
HishazelEyes chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
ahhh this is so sad... it should have been considered as a tragedy! hehe anyway, it's a great excuse to the cannon one
Author D P chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
ummm... opposed to popular belief, this isn't that great. well, not to contradict myself but, the plot was pretty good and the ending was very angsty. Just the grammar wasn't so hot and OOC-ness was so apparent that if OOC-ness WAS an actual substance (say a liquid) this story would be DRENCHED in it. so, yea, could be better...

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iMissHP chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
a really good story, sad but believable. Everything fits together naturally, I loved it. I was looking for a good Dramione, DH compliant, I found it.
leopion chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I really liked the plot of your story. Before reaching the end, I kind of hoped that somehow they would get back together after the war, but I have to admit it really is better this way. However, there are some slightly confusing sentences, most of which, I think, could be fixed by adding a few commas. I can also see a couple of punctuation mistakes when you introduced dialogues. I’ve only read one story of yours so I can’t really tell, but maybe punctuation is a weak point that you need to work on. Anyway, you’ve done a great job.
Love From A Muggle chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Ohh this is the one you were telling me about!

I liked it. Good description of Draco!
StoryGirl02 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
That was so cute, but so sad at the same time. I loved it, as I do all your work. Good job! :)
Penbroke No Name chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
ah this ending hurt ! but the writing was awesome, keep it up :]
XxXxSlytherinPrincessxXxX chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
this was really really good. the grammar/spelling could've been a bit better, it was a little hard to follow some times. but it was really good. i think that there should've been more of a twist at the end because it kind of just left the reader hanging...

but it was really good and I hope to see more ]
heartsewnsleeve chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
That was quite heart breaking. Anyways, it was a very creative writing line, but I'd advise to go through it and edit it a bit. Other than that - it's a very nice read. Keep up the good work!
minorobsessionx chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
OMG i love your story! such a good idea and so originnal. big love. hey i really liked it and if you wanna check out my story too that would be AWESOME!

xoxoxox

ally

ps. DRAMIONE ROX